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06.08.2025

Anne-Lise Andresen
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stunning waterfall
a source of inspiration -
stimuli effect

1401 Poetry Contest

Sponsored by: Brian Strand
Honorable Mention

 

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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/7/2025 11:22:00 AM
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WOW!!! What a creative/fun write and shape you have here. Love the pretty picture. "Good Luck" Hugs... Have a fun day writing away..........
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/7/2025 12:45:00 PM
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- Contest results "Honorable Mention" on my entry, Paula - Thank you :) - hugs
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Jay Narain
Date: 8/7/2025 10:37:00 AM
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Great haiku with beautiful waterfall picture.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/7/2025 12:40:00 PM
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- Thank you, Jay :) - hugs
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Sotto Poet
Date: 8/7/2025 9:38:00 AM
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The haiku's lyrical description of the waterfall is spot on. Additionally, it conveys powerful feelings and images,  Anne-Lise. It will place high, no doubt.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/7/2025 10:18:00 AM
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- It "only" got Honorable Mention, Las ... thanks for your encouraging words :) - hugs
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Yann Rolland
Date: 8/7/2025 2:45:00 AM
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the poem works very well i sounds and visual, great emotions, thanks anne lise
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/7/2025 7:06:00 AM
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- Thank you very much, Yann :) - hugs
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Rowena Velasco
Date: 8/7/2025 1:46:00 AM
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Congratulations! This haiku cascades beautifully—just like the waterfall it describes. The shift to “stimuli effect” in the third line adds a refreshing, almost scientific resonance that deepens the imagery. Stunning work!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/7/2025 7:05:00 AM
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- Thank you very much for your comment and congratulations, Rowena :) - hugs
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Victor Buhagiar
Date: 8/7/2025 1:18:00 AM
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A haiku in art form. So very well done. Brian will be pleased. Hugs
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/7/2025 1:31:00 AM
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- Brian wasn't too pleased, Victor :))) - hugs
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Connie Pachecho
Date: 8/6/2025 10:27:00 PM
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/7/2025 1:33:00 AM
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- @.. @ ++ @ ( ///\\\ - thanks, Connie :) - hugs
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Connie Pachecho
Date: 8/6/2025 10:28:00 PM
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lise, nice poem and art
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Abdullah Alhemaidy
Date: 8/6/2025 2:02:00 PM
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lookalike storm!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/7/2025 1:34:00 AM
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- Storm in a glass of water, A.A. :))) - hugs
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Joe Dimino
Date: 8/6/2025 1:41:00 PM
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I like it! Very complex though, can't imagine myself even attempting to create such a work. Don't think that I could. Inspirational.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/7/2025 1:35:00 AM
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- Sure you can... thanks for your comment, Joe :) - hugs
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Tom Woody
Date: 8/6/2025 1:16:00 PM
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I feel so... connected. Can't explain it. Like a drop among droplets. Yeah, nice
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/6/2025 1:25:00 PM
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- Without water, Tom ... no life ... every drop counts - hugs
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/6/2025 1:10:00 PM
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very interesting all these shapes you used. I am so bad at it!!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/6/2025 1:28:00 PM
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- In my opinion, haiku should not be written in shape form... (only for the contest, Andrea :) - hugs

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