The Congregation

I made my way into the clearing,
headed for the congregation.
I dashed out
and she followed me
with all four legs.
We, excited and startled
the lady with a backpack.
Her eyes and countenance
glowed at our surprise.
She looked our way,
into the neighbor’s backyard.
She’s briskly
headed to her own get together,
on two scrawny legs -
how does she do it? Her two feet
covered in canvas and rubber.
We don’t need such accoutrements.
We are but simple deer,
driven forth by the dawning sun.
She’s forgotten as we sup
on a nearby patch of strawberries.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 9/19/2023 2:09:00 AM
Beautiful flow and great personification. Loved the depth of what youv said here and the imagery. So creative
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/19/2023 4:39:00 AM
Thank you, I.E.! Based on an early morning walk :)
Date: 9/19/2023 1:35:00 AM
Great perspective of deer:)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/19/2023 4:40:00 AM
Thank you, Joanna!
Date: 9/19/2023 1:09:00 AM
You have great imagination. Loved the imagery in your poem. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/19/2023 4:40:00 AM
Thank you, Victor!
Date: 9/18/2023 9:55:00 PM
Wildlife in their congregation if we could really hear their conversation..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/19/2023 4:40:00 AM
Aww! Love that thought! :)
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