The Commitment

A heart filled with desire and passion overflowing
I set out to find you, searching within the realm of love
My soul is comforted with your touch and for the first time I am whole
My mouth knows no words to describe the feelings running through my veins so I am 
speechless
I am silent in the stillness that is your embrace 
Reaching deep within me I find the strength to echo a sigh 
I stretch my hand to caress you and a spark of energy flies from my aura to yours
Together we meet in an embrace and form a circle; a bond that can not be penetrated or 
broken
When or lips connect and our bodies become one we are breathless
Engulfed in spirit and surrounded by the magic of pure love we commit for eternity

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 2/8/2011 8:16:00 PM
Pervasively descriptive. A wonderful write.
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Date: 10/12/2010 11:33:00 AM
This poem electrified me. It overflowed with the magic of love. A very sweet and touching write.....Jancarl
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Date: 10/3/2010 1:20:00 PM
Enjoyed this poem filled with the magic of love. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 5/18/2010 8:58:00 AM
Congrats on your win in the contest, Lena! A very nice entry..... Jimmy
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Date: 5/18/2010 6:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in A Rambling Poet's contest "Breathtaking Love" Lena. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/18/2010 12:49:00 AM
Great poem, I loved every word of it- Congrats and smiles
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Date: 5/16/2010 5:23:00 PM
Congrats Lolita on your winning poem in the B.L. Contest with these lovely lines so very expressive... enjoy your special win and so good to have u back home at Soup.. luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 5/11/2010 3:30:00 AM
well written poetry, thantks for sharing with us today, enjoyed reading!!
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Date: 5/11/2010 2:10:00 AM
How great it is to find this type of spiritual connection, Lolita. Some of us search for it all our lives. You sound happy and I'm so glad to see you posting here again! Love, Carolyn
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