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The Comet

The Comet

The sun
Consumes
The moon delights
The stars watch amused

As I twirl in the night

Copyright © Aurore Severo | Year Posted 2015

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May 7, 2024 at 11:07 AM

Aurore, I'm thinking about seeing a comet and what is actually going on with the sun and moon at the same time. This is quite clever and promotes a lot of thought with very few words. Was actually seeing a comet an inspiration for this or were you creatively composing? Just curious.

Andrea Dietrich

April 18, 2021 at 9:10 AM

a cute and enjoyable little poem!

Connie Marcum Wong

May 6, 2016 at 2:32 AM

A warm welcome to Poetry Soup Aurore. Your poem reminds me a bit of an older poem of mine called Celestial Shades. I hope you will enjoy all the friendly talented poets here. I enjoyed your first offering very much. Aloha, Connie ; )

May 24, 2016 at 11:59 PM

I will for sure read thank you, xoxoxoxoxox

December 31, 2015 at 12:09 AM

Nice imagery!

February 12, 2016 at 10:55 PM

thank you xoxo

August 9, 2015 at 9:28 PM

The celestial dance of a cosmic trance. Even heavens above are amazed per chance.

August 29, 2015 at 11:03 PM

xoxoxo thank you

August 9, 2015 at 9:52 AM

a 7 + 10 your work is outstand, Aurore, hugs Eve

August 9, 2015 at 3:59 PM

thank you xoxo

August 4, 2015 at 11:34 AM

A most delightful poem, Aurore! You whirl and twirl under the heavenly sky, and we follow in your wake! This exudes the joy of living...// paul

August 4, 2015 at 11:41 PM

thank you Paul xoxo

Richard Lamoureux

August 1, 2015 at 8:51 AM

I have enjoyed your work, you will fit in nicely. Welcome to the soup.

August 4, 2015 at 11:40 PM

I hope size 6

Afolabi Muideen

August 1, 2015 at 3:05 AM

A wonderful write to wellcome yourself to the great community where you will meet variety of peoples who are willing and ready to support by giving you positive feedback. Also is a place where you will lean and be sharpened by reading others poetry. I would like to make friend with you, also I will be looking forward to see read much of your wonderful write. Hope you don't mind to check me up.........A.M.

August 4, 2015 at 11:40 PM

warm kindness thank you

July 30, 2015 at 8:52 PM

such an outstanding read....you have true talent indeed.....;)

July 31, 2015 at 9:29 PM

thank you eric xoxo

Connie Marcum Wong

July 29, 2015 at 4:12 PM

Welcome to poetry Soup Aurore. Love your pretty name. I enjoyed this magical piece and look forward to reading more! 7 Aloha, Connie

July 29, 2015 at 11:15 PM

aloha thank you

July 28, 2015 at 5:20 PM

Lovely write :) welcome to PoetrySoup Aurore.. ~ Emilia

July 29, 2015 at 11:14 PM

thank you

July 28, 2015 at 2:39 PM

Lovely imagery Aurore, a delight to read, smiles, James :) :)

July 28, 2015 at 4:06 PM

thank you james

July 28, 2015 at 11:41 AM

Fine short poem - I think this is called a concrete poem - but whatever it is called - I like it. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

July 28, 2015 at 4:06 PM

thank you

July 26, 2015 at 10:31 PM

Nice poem Aurore!! I enjoyed reading.

July 28, 2015 at 4:05 PM

thank you

Poet Destroyer A

July 26, 2015 at 10:19 PM

Aurore, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

July 26, 2015 at 9:42 PM

Nice to enjoy your words this evening. Light & Love

July 26, 2015 at 10:26 PM

Light & Love & Woman Power! thanks

July 25, 2015 at 10:47 PM

Aurore, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

July 26, 2015 at 12:59 AM

thanks

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