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The Colour Black

I had an old black car Oh how it shone and reflected the lights and the moon But alas I traded it in for a modern day sleek Strange how we mourn for the things we seek. I had an old black doll Oh how she smiled with her rose-red cheek glow But alas I grew up and lost her in years Strange how we mourn for the things we hold dear. I had an old black dog Oh how she roamed with me my own personal guide Strange how we mourn for the pets who have died. I have no car, no doll and no pet Oh how I remember the love of all that was black Strange how we mourn when we take a look back.

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Date: 4/22/2022 11:55:00 AM
Brilliant, Janine. Where have you been? Please keep writing.
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Date: 12/20/2021 7:21:00 PM
A beautiful poem on many levels, thank you.
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Janine Lever
Date: 10/7/2023 2:42:00 PM
thank you, have just seen your comment thank you for taking the time to comment and glad you liked it.xx
Date: 11/10/2021 9:50:00 AM
I'm a huge fan of the colour black... Smiles. I love the image you portrayed in every verse especially the last verse when you had none but just memories...
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Janine Lever
Date: 10/7/2023 2:41:00 PM
belated reply to say thankyou, been off 'soup' for quite a while but just reading through my poems and saw your comment, thank you so very much, i took a look at yours and am delighted with yours too. thank you againxx
Date: 9/12/2021 1:31:00 PM
Nice piece Janine, good rhyme and flow with nice imagery too. Hope you're doing fine, take care and blessings from Scotland, Gordon
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