The Colossus of Rhodes

The intellect behind you
Were great without measure
Such that your fame grew
A poweful you, a life treasure.

Helios still would be glad
Gifted hands who thought him 
up
The beauty of your stood
The fame that you had
Like the running over of a cup
Your sight inspired every mood.

Even at your wash
The jealousy of the land
Who ruined a huge you
Your fame still a crush 
Of every gifted hand
To tell of your tale so true.

Though great was your fall,
In my poetry you mightily stand 
tall.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Jones Avatar
May 2, 2013 at 4:37 PM
Congratulations... great winning poem..
Lanre Avatar
May 2, 2013 at 8:23 PM
Donna I can't thank you enough. Thanks for stopping by. GL.xxx
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April 26, 2013 at 9:30 PM
Hi Goodness, thank you for the wonderful poem and stunning imagery in my "7 wonders of the world contest." CONGRATULATIONS!!! Thanks for the support. Take Care & Good Night ;-) ~LINDA
Lanre Avatar
April 27, 2013 at 3:39 AM
Thanks PD. Take care too. GL xoxo
Martin Avatar
April 26, 2013 at 8:28 PM
Colossus--- that's such a great word to begin with. Very flavorful, you evoked an exotic spirit in your poem. Congrats!
Lanre Avatar
April 27, 2013 at 3:40 AM
Thanks Martins. GL
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April 26, 2013 at 8:18 PM
Goodness, congrats with your 7 wonder poem <3 LUV ~*~SKAT
Lanre Avatar
April 27, 2013 at 3:41 AM
Skat, thanks for stopping by. GL
Harper Avatar
April 26, 2013 at 6:58 PM
Excellent poem Goodness, about the Great Colossus of Rhodes, congratulations
Jones Avatar
April 26, 2013 at 12:51 PM
Congratulations on your win
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April 26, 2013 at 4:52 AM
Congrats goodness on your deserving win~A.O
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