The Colors of My Mind

As I turn my thoughts inward, my imagination runs rife.
Melted candle wax paints my mind in the colors of my life.

Dripping over the surface in a dazzeling display,
leaving trails of colors mixing here and there along the way.

The candles burn in sequence; each the other lights
depositing layers of color as another one ignites.

Pink is my compassion, nurturing and love.
Blue is my tranquility and faith in Heaven above.

Green defines my roots and Irish ancestry.
Yellow is my imagination and creativity.

The colors keep on growing and expanding on my mind;
Each represents all I am and everything I find.

Someday the candle will burn out and the colors turn to black;
Until that time, I will seek out the colors that I lack.


February 24, 2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 4/9/2018 9:34:00 PM
Wow, awesome. Superbly done, Janece. Congrats on your podium finish.
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Date: 3/24/2018 10:15:00 AM
Lovely couplets filled with imagery of your mind, Janece. I enjoyed reading your poem, and congratulations on your podium win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 3/22/2018 1:39:00 PM
Many congrats Janece, i especially love those last 2 lines:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 3/22/2018 11:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Janece with your beautifully written couplets, a joy to read. :))
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Date: 3/22/2018 10:17:00 AM
Janece, congrats on your placement. Very creative. Loved it. Well deserved.
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Date: 3/22/2018 7:32:00 AM
Congrats on your placement in my humble contest, Janece, and I love those last two lines. Viv x
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Date: 3/19/2018 8:13:00 PM
Really enjoyed reading this poem. Intuitive and colorful, real. Good luck in contest. I think you have a winner.
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Date: 2/26/2018 3:48:00 PM
What an excellent reflective poem... A great choice for the contest..
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Jan Terry
Date: 2/26/2018 6:40:00 PM
Thank you, Silent One, for taking a look at my poem and leaving your positive comments.
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