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The Colorado Man

He left the road, the hurried pace, the noise,
To find a truth the mountains hold inside,
Where ancient granite answers nature’s voice,
And freedom’s breath on every breeze does ride.
He felt the call, the primal, deep desire,
To shed the old and greet the mountain high,
To touch the sun, a burning, golden fire,
Beneath the vast, unending Colorado sky. 

He saw the fire in the sky at night,
A meteor shower’s breathtaking display,
The stars like diamonds, shedding gentle light,
Chasing the world’s demanding cares away.
He heard the stream’s soft, whispering song, the pines’ low sigh,
A serenity that sinks into the soul,
And saw the eagles in their silent fly,
Making the wounded spirit strong and whole. 

Now in this solitude, his heart takes wing,
He seeks the grace in every rock and tree,
A deeper wisdom that the mountains bring,
A sense of belonging, wild and truly free.
He understands the land’s enduring might,
And vows to guard this sacred, hallowed ground,
From those who’d dim its wonder, steal its light,
Where true, untroubled joy can still be found. 

Oh, Colorado high, a feeling pure and grand,
A newborn soul, reborn in mountain air,
With heaven’s beauty held within his hand,
A Rocky Mountain High beyond compare.
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Rodrigues Avatar
December 13, 2025 at 3:39 AM
Very nice, William! Belated congrats on POTD!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
December 13, 2025 at 4:20 AM
It’s all good, my friend, thank you.
Delegans Avatar
December 9, 2025 at 9:43 PM
Great poem! Congrats on POTD.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
December 9, 2025 at 10:12 PM
Thank you, my friend.
Hind Avatar
December 9, 2025 at 9:42 PM
I love the mountains. I live in the mountains. Congrats on POTD!! Very nice!!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
December 9, 2025 at 10:10 PM
Beaches, but a couple of mountain toppers; Mauna Kea/White Mountain, 13.8k sq. ft., and Mauna Loa/Long Mountain, 13.6k sq. ft. Thank you, Aloha.
Gifford Avatar
December 9, 2025 at 3:35 PM
Congratulations on your beautiful poem being POTD, Hilo. Beautifully written and a great read. Have a wonderful day.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
December 9, 2025 at 4:29 PM
A hearty shout out of thanks, my friend.
Nicole Avatar
December 9, 2025 at 2:06 PM
' The stars like diamonds, shedding gentle light, a deeper wisdom that the mountains bring. ' This thought touches my heart, because there's a sense of peace in such moments. Congratulations William, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
December 9, 2025 at 4:26 PM
In light of your gracious endeavors, you have my gratitude, Aloha.
Rodgers Avatar
December 9, 2025 at 8:16 AM
Hey HP, Congrats on POTD! It’s like the journey wasn't just physical, but a way to reset the inner compass. That feeling of things clicking into place, of shedding what doesn't matter and just breathing that big air, it's powerful. Autumn Blessings, HP, Daniel
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
December 9, 2025 at 9:45 AM
That is a beautiful message, Daniel. Thank you for the kind words and the heartfelt reflection.
Roper Avatar
December 9, 2025 at 8:13 AM
To touch the sky and see the fire of the unstoppable meteors speed by. When on top of the highest mountains in the round surroundings and the skies are free of clouds, it's an epic sight—a magical stage of stars. Beautiful, William. Congratulations on POTD,
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
December 9, 2025 at 9:36 AM
My thanks for your added highlights, most admirable indeed, Aloha.
Goldsmith Avatar
December 9, 2025 at 7:28 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "The Colorado Man" write/story. Have a Blessed Day with your wonderful Win...
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
December 9, 2025 at 7:55 AM
Truly appreciative, Aloha.
Edmonds  Avatar
December 9, 2025 at 5:47 AM
A wonderful write Hilo. Congratulations on having received the honour of poem of the day… Beryl
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
December 9, 2025 at 7:53 AM
Welcoming words, thank you, Aloha.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
December 9, 2025 at 4:20 AM
applause! Delighted to see your masterpiece was designated as POTD. Yes, a great contest entry.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
December 9, 2025 at 7:26 AM
Again, my heartfelt thanks, Aloha.
Kitchin Avatar
December 9, 2025 at 3:20 AM
William, a great poem, congratulations on POTD.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
December 9, 2025 at 7:20 AM
Greatly appreciated, Aloha.
Jones Avatar
December 9, 2025 at 12:46 AM
A nice Colorado write! Congratulations as well on potd Hilo!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
December 9, 2025 at 7:15 AM
My sincerest thank you, Aloha.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
December 7, 2025 at 4:49 PM
Your ability to write such exquisite poems consistently leaves me breathless. This one is a masterpiece without using showy vocabulary. Definitely a fave. You're my new favorite poet :-)
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
December 7, 2025 at 5:42 PM
As noted by your fave, thank you by the way, this poem became my entry to the ‘One Frosty Winter’s Eve Poetry Contest’, just letting you know.
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