The Color of Our Blood

oh how i love the color red red is love and love is red. i painted a moment used a palate with every shade of red,  only red. that is the color of our love, of pain of lips of blood of skin all and more is our love. used a  palate of reds painted a moment painted you, and with depth of color i captured you. perfectly! i never spilled a drop, my brushes, my knives, my hands, my eyes, they all served me well. moments are not easy to create. how precious they are, difficult to inhale fully but even strained  i would always take you all in. the fullness of you all in. i would never spill a drop. me? i'm all in. my creation takes form stands and walks, i follow, paint, not a drop  do i spill. when you offer gifts they need to be special they need to be - well thought out. oh! how well thought out you are. oh! what moments we have shared. life, so kind to us, the time we've spent. if a philosophy teacher, if one asked me, "what's it all about" i would say "you" i would ace that test. nothing exists in its full majestic glory until i experience it with you. i would lift the sun every morn draw it down every eve illuminate the sky fantastic. every morn. every eve. a lover's night under the moon, part the clouds if like curtains they blocked our view, if like a wall they blocked our light. now, my moment painted i observe. my hand nowhere to be seen it was you guided this piece. you and me my love surrounded in red  against a red background  and not a detail unclear. our hands holding. our lips touching. you are my breath the beat of my heart neatly painted in red, perfect! it is us, our love is red every shade and every tone is we. 05~12~2014 Maurice Yvonne

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 12/6/2014 10:21:00 PM
All your shades of Reds have blended into a beautiful mosaic of love - master are you with the word-love paint -- a different shade of red color burst from each syllable . . . I see the red of blood pumping forth giving life to the people you love. Awesome job my dear dear friend -- another one for my favs -- what's your next color?
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Date: 12/6/2014 3:57:00 AM
WOW WOW WOW WOW and WOW did I say WOW - for once am speechless - WOW - into faves - WOW Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 12/6/2014 1:43:00 AM
Thrilling, Maurice. It's so hard to imagine that a man can actually love this way...You really are something. Lovely piece!
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Date: 12/6/2014 1:20:00 AM
Highly creative n unique is this write Maurice! Hv a blessed day!
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Date: 12/6/2014 12:26:00 AM
this goes along with your theme of how your love is passionate as well, Maurice. No wonder you color it red. as always, you come across amazing with romantic poetry. You should get a lot of faves on this one!! (just had to peek on here one more time to see your latest work!)
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Date: 12/5/2014 11:32:00 PM
Wow and double wow!! Maurice, this poem is special - expressive, passionate, artistic, uniquely creative! I must add this to my faves...love & blessings, Rhonda
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