Premiere Contest WinnerThe Color Blue

I have a passion for the blue color
Dark blues like the deepest oceans
Or light ones as the brightest skies

Navy blues bring out the poet in me
And I meditate using a Lapis Lazuli
My protection spell is a teal circle of fire
And of course my wedding ring has a Sapphire

But that’s not all, mind you
I love my denim jeans of indigo blue
I just have to buy anything blue I see
From a peacock phone
To a cobalt TV

You can call me crazy 
Or really eccentric 
Since my car is a shiny blue electric

I still want to paint my hair
With all shades of blue
But I have to convince hubby first
To not put me in a straitjacket…
…UNLESS IT’S BLUE…

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January 26, 2017
1st place in the Contest: The Color Blue
Sponsor: Janis Thompson
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Roberts Avatar
February 7, 2017 at 6:47 PM
Thumbs up
Polydoro Avatar
February 7, 2017 at 7:09 PM
thanks :)
Martin Avatar
February 1, 2017 at 3:09 PM
Congratulations on your win Claudia! Like the last stanza! :-)
Polydoro Avatar
February 6, 2017 at 3:48 PM
Thanks a lot, Mark!!! I'm glad you liked :)
U.D Palawon  Avatar
January 31, 2017 at 11:04 PM
Humorous! I like this one. Congrats on your first place Claudia!:D
Polydoro Avatar
February 1, 2017 at 5:08 AM
Thank you, Sunita!!! it was really fun to write it... hehehe :P
Daniel Avatar
January 31, 2017 at 7:13 AM
This is a cute one, Claudia:) congratulations on your trophy win:)
Polydoro Avatar
January 31, 2017 at 7:45 AM
Thank you, Jo!!! I really enjoyed writing it... :) Thanks Wendy!!! xoxoxo
Rycroft Avatar
January 31, 2017 at 7:31 AM
Congrats x great blue poem x
Kimathi Avatar
January 31, 2017 at 1:41 AM
Congrats Claudia, for your well, deserved first placement with this beautiful piece!! ;-)
Polydoro Avatar
January 31, 2017 at 7:44 AM
Thanks a lot, Teddy, I'm glad you liked :)
May Avatar
January 30, 2017 at 9:14 PM
True blue...Congrats on your top win Claudia
Polydoro Avatar
January 31, 2017 at 6:46 AM
Thanks a lot, Joseph!!! :)
Wolf Avatar
January 30, 2017 at 6:53 PM
I love the look of that trophy on your page. A well-deserved win, Claudia. /|\
Polydoro Avatar
January 30, 2017 at 8:14 PM
Thank you Budgie!!!! hehehe - it was a great surprise :)
Haight Avatar
January 30, 2017 at 6:48 PM
Love how you addressed the theme, Claudia...and the last line too! Congratulations on your First Place Trophy win! Sandra
Polydoro Avatar
January 30, 2017 at 8:11 PM
Thank you, Sandra!!! I really loved writing it - hehehe :)
Allison Avatar
January 30, 2017 at 3:07 PM
I dont feel blue after reading this Claudia! many congrats - its a fun write and you deserve to be at the top of the podium:-) hugs jan xx
Polydoro Avatar
January 30, 2017 at 3:27 PM
Thank you Jan!!! It was a fun poem to write... i need to try my hand in writing more fun ones... and OMG I still can't believe I got this placement... specially with such great poems on the contest... I'm really happy :)
Burch Avatar
January 30, 2017 at 2:16 PM
Lol!! Big congratulations Claudia!! Very well done!! Big Hugggs. Deb
Polydoro Avatar
January 30, 2017 at 3:24 PM
Thank you Deb!!!! I so needed the good news on this Monday. I still have a smile on my face. . Hugs back :*
Smith Avatar
January 30, 2017 at 12:49 PM
This great Claudia no wonder it took first...congratulations
Polydoro Avatar
January 30, 2017 at 3:22 PM
Thank you Tim!!!! I'm so so happy :)
White Avatar
January 30, 2017 at 12:43 PM
CLAUDIA!!!! So wonderful, congratulations sweetie, so well earned :D
Polydoro Avatar
January 30, 2017 at 3:22 PM
I still can't believe it! Thank you sweetie!!!! I wouldn't even be here if it wasn't for you... <3
Medders Tobechi Avatar
January 30, 2017 at 12:38 PM
Claudia, thanks so much for being in the contest. I loved this unique verse. Congratulations on your trophy win.
Polydoro Avatar
January 30, 2017 at 3:13 PM
Janis!!!! Wow, thank you! I can't say how honored I am that you've liked my poem and chose it for a trophy... I'm still spellbound... thank You! It was great to write this poem for your contest. I had a lot of fun! Xoxoxo
Wolf Avatar
January 27, 2017 at 6:50 PM
Haha, that's a classic! Excuse my ignorance, but are Lapis Lazuli from Egypt? This will do well in the contest I'm sure, Clau /|\
Polydoro Avatar
January 28, 2017 at 4:33 AM
Thank you Budgie!!! I'm happy you liked! And i had no idea where lapis lazuli was from until your question.... lol of course i HAD TO look up - it's from Afghanistan and Pakistan :D.
White Avatar
January 27, 2017 at 2:29 AM
LOL Clau, can you come over here and tell the hospital I want a blue straitjacket? Love your poem :D
Polydoro Avatar
January 27, 2017 at 7:27 AM
Consider it done!!! I'll bring you one to match mine! :P Actually hubby will have to drive me... you know... since I'll have my straitjacket on and all... hahaha - lol :P - Thanks sweetie... (And Janis asked to think outside the box - hahaha)
Turner Avatar
January 26, 2017 at 7:43 PM
Yes, it is very funny, Claudia. A very fun read:)
Polydoro Avatar
January 26, 2017 at 7:54 PM
hehehe, Thanks Daniel :) :D
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