The Color Black

I ask him his favorite color.
Mine is blue.
He tells me, "Black."
I must have looked disconcerted,
Because he hastens to explain-
Not for a morbid reason...
He just likes the color.
I considered.

Black is
All the sharp and flat piano keys
It's the soft darkness you savor
Before subjecting yourself to
The harsh brightness of morning
It's the color of a kiss
Because you always close your eyes
It's my favorite dress, or printed words, or
The clean line of an brushstroke on canvas
Black is a silhouette against a sunset
Or the deepened shadows before the dawn
It's a night sky or a raven's wing
The pureness of a pool of ink
It's a storm cloud rolling in
As the wind holds its breath
Before shattering the sky
Into a thousand pieces
Edged in light
It's the deepness of the sea 
At midnight

Black is the soft curls of his hair.
Black is his eyes, which shine...

I decide black
Is one of my favorite colors too.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 2/6/2014 12:29:00 PM
I had never given black as a color any thought as this, but after reading your poem I can now look at black as something other than just a dark complexion on everything. I enjoyed your writing very much
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Date: 2/6/2014 2:29:00 PM
Thanks :) I'm glad you like it.
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