The Cloudiest Day

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My grandfather passed away recently. He was battling pancreatic cancer. The day of my family buried his ashes, was a rainy day.

I didn't like losing you
And my tears cried the truth
With rain that came
On the cloudiest day
Like heaven was crying too



©2014 Honestly JT

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/10/2014 8:21:00 AM

- Many beautiful 1st place winning poem ..... - I enjoy reading yours Honestly !! - Congratulations! - Happy weekend :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 10/10/2014 7:40:00 AM

Ah, very beautiful. Considering the story behind this lovely poem makes it so so beautiful. I am glad to see it received a first place win.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/10/2014 6:04:00 AM

HeartFelt write, Honestly, congrats on the win

Jan Allison

Date: 10/10/2014 4:37:00 AM

simply sensational - such a touching write - my heart goes out to you I can relate to this write so much, many congrats on your win :-( hugs jan xxx

Len Gasun

Date: 10/10/2014 2:42:00 AM

Congratulations my dear poet friend JT. I thoroughly enjoyed your wonderful write! Thank you so much for sharing and your loving support. Hugs and cheers! Love lots, Leonora

Aiyah Torres

Date: 9/11/2014 3:09:00 PM

awesome! ... very heartfelt lines... I'm drowned in your ink.. this is the best! >>:"))