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The Closed Morning

no sunshine today the cloud between the roses the cherry tree closed 7/4/2018

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Manu Singh Tanwar

Date: 4/7/2018 3:25:00 AM

such a great texture in front of eyes clouds with there gray color enhancing the red color of rose ...beautiful picture framed in lines...lovely

Probir Gupta
Date: 4/7/2018 7:39:00 AM

Beautiful for those who see beauty in everything ... Thank you ...

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/6/2018 10:35:00 PM

the cloud between the roses...very nice line!

Probir Gupta
Date: 4/7/2018 7:41:00 AM

Yes ... and that is the attraction ... probir

James Marshall Goff

Date: 4/6/2018 9:11:00 PM

Well done, Probir...leaves the reader feeling this heaviness...

Probir Gupta
Date: 4/6/2018 9:23:00 PM

Thanks James ... Your smiling face melts the cloud ...