The Clock It Mocks

Left out in the cold
Silent night; my jilted star
That once blazed in cherish across her world
That once lit up her heart and twinkled her toes
Now, no longer glows

Once; upon a long time ago
A memory now of old forgotten times
A star now in decline
It lies there – dead

A death star now exploding into Supernova’s
Of hope
Hoping against useless hopelessness
That bleeds you to the core when
Drowning in repetitive
Wonderment

To choking on what could have, should have 
Been
Before Him…

Before. It was just Us

Her hands, I clearly see, frozen in pantomime 
Of words unsaid
They spilled across the floor like a whore
His smell upon our bed
Insanity climbing through my head
It spreads, like a disease
Only time can purge

Only the clock

It mocks

Tick tock
Tick tock…



"Write me sad"

11 September 2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Yvonne Avatar
October 30, 2014 at 5:27 AM
This is really, really good Mark. Congratulations on your well deserved win.
Meier-Hans Avatar
October 29, 2014 at 10:15 PM
Congratulations on your win Mark.
Allison Avatar
October 29, 2014 at 7:42 PM
a very touching write many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Puddifoot Avatar
October 29, 2014 at 7:38 PM
this one had an immediate impact on me, and it doesn't surprise me to discover that it's one of yours, as you know I really like your poetry...I loved those opening lines, and I also liked the sprinkling of internal rhyme, and the end rhyme you used - great title too! congrats on your win in my contest :)
Lindley Avatar
October 11, 2014 at 6:30 PM
This is a free verse write that truly excels . Has the flavor, the raw emotion and the images to make a sad but bold statement. I rarely fav free verse but this I add to my fav list and am honored to do so. If it was rejected that was a pure travesty. Super 7 I give..
Trichet Avatar
October 11, 2014 at 9:50 PM
Hey thanks Robert, your kind words are inspiring and I'll cherish them. I unfortunately missed out on getting this into the contest! Thanks for the visit
Dietrich Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 10:45 PM
wow, another very good one here. I see that it was in the rejection contest and yet I see no congratulations down here. If that contest got judged and you were not a winner, it's a travesty. Your writing is very well honed. I don't normally care for the way many poets write their free verse. You are someone whose free verse I would want to read again and again. A new fave poet for me. I noticed I had already seen a few of your other poems earlier and they too were superlative.
Trichet Avatar
October 11, 2014 at 9:48 PM
Thanks Andrea for your kind words. Unfortunately I missed this contest! Glad u liked it :)
Mcdaid Avatar
September 18, 2014 at 9:16 AM
really love the way you painted the visions in this excellent piece
Michelle Avatar
September 12, 2014 at 7:53 AM
I LOOOVEEE this!!!!! Such a powerful and nostalgic write!!! Good luck in the conest.. Have a wonderful morning Mark. :) =Juli-Michelle
Life Avatar
September 11, 2014 at 11:51 PM
Like it...should do well in contest. GL
Yvonne Avatar
September 11, 2014 at 11:29 PM
A very touching piece. an excellent write.
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