The Clever Ape To the Horrible Human

I'm nothing special, just plain old me

Ancestors from my past came down from the tree

We scratched our knuckles and found that hurt

Scraping our skin through our neighbourhood dirt

As wise as I was at that young age

My skin bleeding, something needed to change


The fruit above caught my eye

As I unarched my back it made me sigh

Why had dad, not thought of this before

Than knuckling dirt on our neighbourhood floor

As I looked around and viewed our troop

They were all like me, not one did stoop

Is it a corner we've turned, and is it for the best

This standing up, the evolution test


For through the years we transformed and formed

Into a standing ape like human form

Was this a path for us to take

Or a misleading path and it's all a mistake

It's millions of years, later now

Why have we become what we are now

Our treatment of us, is oh so sad

What made us, turn out so bad


What will it take to be so sure

Maybe taking that stance on our neighbourhood floor

And why do I say what you read above

It's mans inhumanity to man, it sure ain't love

So what do we do to iron this out

I'm no Stephen Hawking's, but please give me a shout!

It's best to discuss this sitting under a tree

As we look up above, where we used to be





For Constance's ' A Rambling Poet~ contest 'Why oh Why?' 
This was written in Nov 08 by James Fraser.
It is my second poem and it was posted on June 12th 2009, and it received two comments.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Kendrick Avatar
October 30, 2010 at 6:01 AM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
Augustus Avatar
October 15, 2010 at 2:29 PM
Congratulations on getting more than two comments. There certainly well deserved because this is a creative and well thought out piece. Congratulations on your win!
Roberts Avatar
October 9, 2010 at 2:25 PM
wonderful entry , congrats on your win James, much enjoyed
Brown Avatar
October 8, 2010 at 10:43 AM
Congratulations on your win James. Love,Carol
Neels Avatar
October 8, 2010 at 10:19 AM
Evolution so interestingly told James! Congratulations on your excellent win in the contest ;) enjoy the weekend ahead ~ Wilma
Mehta Avatar
October 8, 2010 at 5:29 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest, James
La France Avatar
October 8, 2010 at 4:08 AM
Congratulations, James, with your placement in my contest Why Oh Why ~~
Sweetheart Avatar
October 7, 2010 at 11:59 PM
Congrats James on your super win in Constance's contest with this extra special entry .. enjoy your victorious moment this happy weekend with luv..
Haick Avatar
October 7, 2010 at 10:53 PM
Now this is something to dwell on, James..Thanks for sharing..Congratulations on your win in the contest...Peace, love, Audrey
Dietrich Avatar
October 7, 2010 at 9:54 PM
Congratulations, james. It is like a cool story to read! Do you mean your second poem EVER??? I remember my first poems here didn't get as much traffic either. Luv, Andrea
Gorelick Avatar
June 12, 2009 at 6:15 PM
Oh man, this is terrific. I wish Stephen Hawkings could read this... BG
Bird Avatar
June 12, 2009 at 9:52 AM
The theory of evolution, what a great thought provoking write. The strong transformed and made other life forms and the weak died out. But, so right you are that alot of people are ugly and don't want to see the person inside. Maybe with wonderful hearts like yours we can change this world one day at a time.
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