Iris E. Sankey- Lewis Poet Ghazal

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Inspired by: Debbie Guzzi

The Clearing

There is temporary unrest inside my mind
I am neither up nor down. I am snug waiting the clearing.

My room holds great view, and I'm free
Looking out at sky, and bare trees, hoping for the clearing.

The morning invites calm, and the minutes fade fast
And though my heart feels sore, I'm looking for the clearing.

The bulk of energies I share, should allot me good
Only a fool follows a heart, wavering and wandering from the clearing.

It doesn't take me long to recognize true passion
But take away my pen, books, glasses, and still, I'm addressing the clearing.

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(Written for: Debbie Guzzi Ghazal poem contest)

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Darlene Gifford April 28, 2015 at 8:21 AM So happy to have run across this poem which can have many meanings. Blessings, Darlene

Debbie Guzzi April 12, 2015 at 7:23 PM So pleasant to stop and read a bit of poetry this evening, I love ghazals! The words BEFORE (the clearing) must rhyme new friend! (ex. waiting, hating, dating, skating) thank you. Light & Love Iris E. Sankey- Lewis April 24, 2015 at 12:09 PM Thank you so very much, Debbie. I shall not hesitate to review and rewrite You are indeed, a kind and thoughtful teacher. peace and love.

David Furlong April 6, 2015 at 12:48 PM I read this poem several times wondering on the metaphor of 'The Clearing.' It can be applied in so many different ways and all of them fitted with your words. I enjoyed this poem greatly. Well done Iris. :) Iris E. Sankey- Lewis April 6, 2015 at 9:19 PM Thank you, David. Indeed 'The Clearing' goes a long way.