The City of the Dead

The wind blows clean
scouring in Sakkara, Necropolis of Memphis 
gem of Upper Egypt.
The purity of sand and sky 
maintained by late rising 
in the twentieth century.

The titan walls reach from a sea of silica
crystalline grit of ground quartz
once drowned, 
devoured by desert, now disgorged…
the mill of life having preserved
the germ of memory eternal.

Far from the light surge of 
incandescent and florescent, 
from the leavings of modern man
Sakkara rises again, for such as we to glory in… 

Imhotep’s caress of stone, song of sand
Rises, as morning follows night, 
Rises like bole of palm
stroking the cheek of Ra.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 1/17/2011 8:21:00 AM
the mill of life having preserved the germ of memory eternal. Rises like bole of palm stroking I think these two passages express most accurately the essence - eternity and the present moment. High poetic sensibility and vigilance. Congratulations, Deborah.
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Date: 12/25/2010 8:55:00 PM
Have you ever been to Egypt? I was reminded of the Brooklyn Museum's Egyptian collection when I read this. Hope all is well with you and yours. Best of the season Matthew Anish
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Date: 12/21/2010 3:38:00 PM
thankxx TEACH ..but the red line still showed up so am leaving it alone with your correction done... take another look if u want.. reads OK I think ...appreciate ... pupil...
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Date: 12/21/2010 12:16:00 PM
mystical in every flow of words alighting, debbie.. you've got style that threads all these impressions in a beautiful poetic knot!! classic!.. huggs, nette
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Date: 12/21/2010 11:36:00 AM
Hello Debbie~ How are you I've missed much by missing your fluid words. Wonderful imagery in your poem ,I gather you visited the temples of Egypt recently? If so what a place of wonder. I feel like I went with you in this strong story of the City of the Dead ! Love, Laura :0) ~Happy Holidays!
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Date: 12/21/2010 10:14:00 AM
Very rich with imagery, Debbie-- thank you for giving us a glimpse of this City-- I think you succeeded in bringing it alive through your words-- nikko :)
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Date: 12/21/2010 9:02:00 AM
Great how a trip abroad can stir the creative juices Debbie.. I remember when in Italy and Hawaii too so many poems came flooding out of my pen due to the surroundings... and u have done the same with Egypt... enjoyed another entertaining piece from the collection today with luv...
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