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The Cider Mill

I always knew the cider mill was across the road, Down a little ways from Grandma's house. This day, it must have been October; The afternoon sun was shining hot; The side of the road was dusty. A steady sound was chug-chugging through the air On top of the sweet dusky smell of over-ripe apples. I went to have a look. The mill itself was a squarish box of grey weathered wood. I crept along the path worn in the grass Alongside the building and peered around the edge. Two men looked up in surprise. One was at the top of a machine with a crate of apples; The other was bent over at the bottom, Holding a shiny bucket. Everything about them was brown, Their sunburned faces and hands, their clothes, Their flyaway jackets and felt hats jammed hard on their heads. They froze still in their poses. "Is that cider?" I ventured pointing to the few drops Still dripping from the spout into the bucket. The smell was really strong back here! "Oh, yes!" They both jumped to answer. "Would you like some?" Not waiting for a reply, The bottom man put a rusty tin cup under the spout. The other one pushed in some apples at the top. Out spurted bubbly brown juice! It fuzzed around the edges of the cup. I took an experimental sip. It was totally good! Sweet and warm like the sun! I drank it all. The men were talking now. How was school and how old was I. And I talked, too, how much cider do you make? Where do the apples come from? Why don't you make it all the time? Then I couldn't think of anything more to say So I said goodbye and they said come again, But I never did. I don't know why. It might have spoiled it.

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Date: 4/3/2023 4:19:00 PM
Thanks, Maurice! We always had the sweet as a kid in Ohio, then I was surprised to find the hard one popular in Australia when I came here in the 70's. I love your references to New England; always reminds me of Robert Frost! Elizabeth
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Date: 4/3/2023 8:42:00 AM
Elizabeth, cider was once as popular (if not more) than beer in Early New England. Of course I'm talking about the alcoholic kind. Personally I prefer the sweeter kind. Enjoyed this poem. / Maurice
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Date: 2/19/2023 1:39:00 PM
Yes, Jim. What amazes me now is how kind the men were. The same thing happened with the carpenters at my Grandfather's. I was always asking a lot of questions and they always answered sweetly. Elizabeth
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Date: 2/19/2023 10:40:00 AM
I envy you this experience, E, and now I'm thirsty for some cider which I haven't had in a long, long time.
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Date: 1/12/2023 2:52:00 PM
Ahh!! A delightful tale for the contest. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Elizabeth Mccann
Date: 1/12/2023 11:54:00 PM
Thanks so much, Sara! I'm going to try to keep in touch better. There must be some energy around here somewhere! Elizabeth
Date: 1/3/2023 3:25:00 PM
Nice 'period piece' from your life, Elizabeth. Maybe some things are best if they only happen once. ~ Magic moments, gw
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Date: 1/4/2023 12:56:00 AM
I agree. Sometimes I get greedy and try to repeat. Nope, doesn't fly! Elizabeth
Date: 1/3/2023 2:29:00 PM
what a deep experience , I can see why you kept the memory in your mind, nice one Elizabeth
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Elizabeth Mccann
Date: 1/4/2023 12:56:00 AM
Again, thank you, lovely lady! Elizabeth
Date: 1/2/2023 8:39:00 PM
What a beautiful memory and what a wise child you were. To have realized that going back may have spoiled such a perfect memory. Enjoyed it a lot Elizabeth. Thank you
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Date: 1/3/2023 1:16:00 PM
So kind of you, Wendy! There are all these scenes that call up the way things were in the past, a rural life style. I didn't arrive in Aus until I was 30, so these early ones are US. Elizabeth

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