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The Christmas Bench

THE PARK BENCH AT CHRISTMAS she shed first her hat, gloves and scarf. later her glamorous coat, leggings and shoes. she snatched off her dress to catch the eye, then brassiere and panties but no man partook. she plucked her eyebrows and hair off her scalp, clipped fingers and toes and her iceberg nose, then in utter horror, as she grew older, various parts in a most vulnerable way began to fall away. snowbirds begin to whisper of a skeletal noose — the clickety-clack of a virgin’s jaw in maudlin movement, as only the geese head South, her regret grows madder yet. on the bench Madge sits in silvertone chattering bone “all alone….all alone...all alone” 11/19/2018 Sandra Kendrick’s The Park Bench At Christmas Poetry Contest Poem based upon a photo showing the skeleton of a woman waiting on a park bench hoping to find a man tolove her

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Date: 12/18/2018 8:52:00 AM
I got some humor out of this one in the second stanza where she plucked her eyebrows and hair ..I was thinking over grooming or how we women try to fix everything to look better. I am glad that you decided to participate in my contest and that you chose this picture for your theme. I enjoyed reading your winning work. Congrats. Sara
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/18/2018 9:24:00 AM
Thank you, Sara! I enjoyed your contest! :)
Date: 12/17/2018 3:34:00 PM
I found the imagery so sad Kim, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/17/2018 3:38:00 PM
Thank you, Jan! Merry Christmas!
Date: 11/21/2018 11:48:00 PM
If she had only dialed my number.... lol Great write, Kim. Merry Christmas!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/22/2018 9:13:00 AM
:) so true! She needed to get off the bench!
Date: 11/20/2018 5:40:00 PM
anything to seek attention when loneliness seeps in... and she withers away... deeply astonishing, kim..huggs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/20/2018 5:54:00 PM
Thanks so much, Nette!
Date: 11/19/2018 9:16:00 PM
G'day Kim … some folk never get noticed no matter what they do so their cry in the wilderness is never heard - thanks Kim - Lindsay
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/19/2018 9:27:00 PM
That is so true! <3 Kim
Date: 11/19/2018 2:58:00 PM
"her regret grows madder yet" absolutely exquisite line, Kim! maudlin images striking, Bravo!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/19/2018 2:59:00 PM
Thanks so much, James! :)
Date: 11/19/2018 2:02:00 PM
"In silvertone chattering bone" - you have described how sad and cold Christmas is for some. Well-done.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/19/2018 3:00:00 PM
For sure! I hope never to be that lonely! Always thankful!
Date: 11/19/2018 1:38:00 PM
A moving tribute to loneliness at the harshest time of the year for many. Well done, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/19/2018 3:00:00 PM
Thank you, Line!
Date: 11/19/2018 11:25:00 AM
I read this two or three times and was struck a) by the powerful imagery and b) by how creepy it is!! Then I looked back at the original contest and saw which picture you were basing it on... I understand!!! Great write. Good luck in the contest. Regards, John.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/19/2018 11:28:00 AM
Thanks, John...lol!

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