The Christ

Red hue adorns the western sky As the blazing sun descends Tears fall freely from my eyes Prayers stifled, as daylight ends Frightened and alone, in this cell Sleep would bring welcome relief From the fear, beginning to swell Testing my will, testing my belief Judas Iscariot, was my betrayer Jealousy and greed, sinful traits A single kiss delivered his savior Choosing death, sealing his fate The jailers adorn me with a crown My body is beaten and bruised In their sins they have drowned Proclaiming me, King of the Jews A faithful son, obeying his father Accepting, my preordained ending From his will I would never falter My love for humankind is unending Hands opened, exposing the palms Screaming, as metal pierces the skin Tearfully reciting my favorite psalm Sacrificial lamb, for imagined sin My father watching from above As out of control my life careens Ignoring the prayers from the dove Turning away, refusing to intervene I was preordained for crucifixion For the Gentiles and Jews alike Freely offering eternity in heaven Ask forgiveness, receive salvation
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Horsman Avatar
March 8, 2013 at 4:09 PM
amazing Anthony, i'm not around too much lately, but boy glad i did not miss this...
Goff Avatar
March 5, 2013 at 12:36 PM
Thanks for stopping by, AJ... cool write! jimbo
Johnson Avatar
March 4, 2013 at 2:04 AM
great poetry here Anthony, you paint the story well, without Christ the bloody sinners, are here condemned to hell:)
Dietrich Avatar
March 2, 2013 at 11:31 PM
yes, indeed it was preordained. This has a very lovely quality and I like how you put it in first person!
Duncan Avatar
March 2, 2013 at 6:47 PM
Awesome Tony,,, going to fav's,, thank you for reading Wasn't ME ;}
Kendrick Avatar
March 2, 2013 at 9:16 AM
Great work..It speaks of your faith and your love for our Savior..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for stopping by..Soup mail soon..Sara
Sathasivam Avatar
March 2, 2013 at 1:32 AM
Amen! Excellent and well expressed. Tfs
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