The Choo Choo

The train whistle puffs
Frail familiarity
A world passes by
Muffled train sounds die away
White clouds of smoke drift behind
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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May 16, 2017 at 1:26 AM
Frail familiarity indeed, a past slowly disappearing into white smoke. Beautiful metaphor.
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