The Chill

THE CHILL I feel the chill of my backbone played Like the opera phantom’s piano. Strange, Each hair upon my arms, electrically charged. As the storm lights up my moon-shaped face, With hollow frightened crescent eyes, Flickering something wicked, like A jack-o’-lantern in the deep dark Cavern of night. Another fearsome flash Seems to linger and look at me. I scream. But unlike my childhood dreams, My mother’s not around to coddle me. A thunderous eruption wrinkles the walls, Felling a vainglorious painting to the floor. And the ghostlike pale of face causes me to faint. My knees knock together as I rise from the floor And an oddly dressed woman places me once again Upon the papered wall, awfully pretty with petite roses. 6/29/2017 Free verse
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June 29, 2017 at 10:18 AM
That was really cool Kim, I love the ending of this piece, it was such a surprise and a fantastic one at that. Great job my friend.
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June 29, 2017 at 10:36 AM
Thanks! I don't often plan ahead. I just see where the tale is taking me ;)
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June 29, 2017 at 9:31 AM
I like this a lot, Kim. Very nice.
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June 29, 2017 at 9:46 AM
Thanks, Dale!
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