The Child Won'T Paint

The Infant won’t paint, cried out the Father;
he sensing an otherworldly genius 
in the toddler’s eyes.

The painterly parent bought paper, acrylics,
oils, brushes, chalks, and crayons…

not even a finger painting emerged.

The child steadfastly refused to paint.

The father exclaimed:
“For the glory of God why not paint!”

His offspring turned away to suck his thumb.

Days past…years.
The child grew to be a sullen teenager.
He began to write poetry – and such woeful, 
doleful poetry!

Exclamation marks rose up in heaven
as thick as bamboo forests.

His father read them, and his face grew ashen
with a sickly alarm.

The poems spoke of phantasmagorical visions,
hordes of screaming demons dismembered
herds of hapless humans. 


Abysmal were the visions unleashed 
from the boy’s erupting consciousness.
Presentiments flew up from the pages
as horrid as the blood-red dragons of Hades.

After reading his son’s latest works
the father exclaimed: 
“For God’s sake, NEVER paint!”

He took the young man for long walks in the country,
forced him to join a local soccer team,
suggested a military career,
alas 

the boy began to paint.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 9/18/2020 7:51:00 PM
oh goodness! lol...be careful what you wish for father...haha good one! :)
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Eric Ashford
Date: 9/18/2020 8:24:00 PM
Thanks for the review Susan, I had some sly fun writing this one! e
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