The Child With a Name

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writing this I hoped to make a Christmas poem woman friendly and also putting a woman in the center of the creation of god, and did not use his name as not to offend anyone, but in referring to Mary, we all know who I am writing about,

It’s fortunate to say
A mother named Mary became
And gave us a child with a name
And all on the earth
Were all to be treated the same
He stood as a stone 
But was broken and torn
Just all the same
	
And some want to forget
And not to relive
Anymore of his pain 
And not any of the blame
Who ask how is it before
You ever were born
You were already giving a name

They cannot believe 
In anyway conceive
That any love you can give
Comes just from a name
Why stay in the dark?
You know just who you are
When in the beginning
The way was lit
For you all, by a star

Not to believe that love
And the promise of it
Comes just from a name 
But still the message is true
That is for all of you
Treat everyone the same

To believe we should not
Will always be why
Many of our children, still cry
And to live and let live
Be happy to give
You won’t even try
 
It is fortunate to say
Mother named Mary became
And is here to remind us
As we all lose our aim
But to remember this day
A woman named Mary became
The one who gave us
The child with a name

written 10-17-13 revised 11/24/14

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 12/8/2014 9:03:00 PM
Congrats, Cynthia, on a wonderful win with this inspiring poem! Hugs, Rhonda
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Cynthia Ferguson
Date: 12/9/2014 4:14:00 AM
thank you Rhonda , I just hope I did something for woman more, :)
Date: 12/8/2014 8:32:00 PM
Wonderful poem, congrats on the win
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Cynthia Ferguson
Date: 12/9/2014 4:15:00 AM
your always so kind Dr. Ram,
Date: 12/8/2014 4:39:00 PM
Great poem Cynthia. Congratulations on your win.
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Cynthia Ferguson
Date: 12/9/2014 4:18:00 AM
I am just happy at trying to be in a contest , I always feel what I write does not fit, thank you and I hope I did something good for woman and reminding every one a woman was involved in his creation
Date: 12/8/2014 3:46:00 PM
Good for you. Congratulations on your win!
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Cynthia Ferguson
Date: 12/9/2014 4:19:00 AM
thank you Maurice, always happy to hear from you
Date: 12/8/2014 1:14:00 PM
I enjoyed reading this winner..Way to go...Congrats..Sara
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Cynthia Ferguson
Date: 12/9/2014 4:20:00 AM
Thank you Sara , happy you liked it, I have a daughter sarah, :)
Date: 12/8/2014 11:08:00 AM
many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Cynthia Ferguson
Date: 12/9/2014 4:21:00 AM
thank you Jan , you have always been kind :)
Date: 12/8/2014 10:28:00 AM
Congratulations and God bless you with love and prayers,... I have posted a blog on this topic if you're interested. Gina
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Cynthia Ferguson
Date: 12/8/2014 10:37:00 AM
I believe woman need a Christmas poem and should not be left out in any religion and be recognized as an important part of it all,
Date: 12/8/2014 2:41:00 AM
Congrats Cynthia. God Bless.
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Cynthia Ferguson
Date: 12/8/2014 10:38:00 AM
thank you rob
Date: 11/24/2014 6:11:00 AM
- A lovely poem, Cynthia ... "But still the message is true" !!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Cynthia Ferguson
Date: 11/24/2014 8:33:00 AM
thank you Anne -Lise, :)
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