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The Chiaroscuro of Children - Monoku 4

rainy day water colors refrigerator Rembrandts ©1/2/2018 submitted to – Monoku 4: Colours

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Susan Ashley

Date: 1/6/2018 9:06:00 PM

This is a clever and creative monoku John. Very lovely. Congratulations for your fine win! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/5/2018 9:02:00 PM

This was one of my favorites, John. So creative. Congrats on the winner list.

Lu Loo

Date: 1/5/2018 1:20:00 PM

beautiful monoku dear John, one of my faves, congrats :)-luloo

Sandra Haight

Date: 1/5/2018 9:37:00 AM

A very clever Monoku, John. Congratulations on your placement! Sandra

Probir Gupta

Date: 1/5/2018 4:28:00 AM

Nicely penned ... Congratulations ...

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 1/4/2018 11:42:00 PM

Congratulations, John on your win.

Eve Roper

Date: 1/4/2018 7:18:00 PM

wonderful monoku, John, congratulations on your win Hugs eve ~`*

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/4/2018 12:05:00 PM

- Hi John, congratulations on your winning line :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charlie Smith

Date: 1/4/2018 11:42:00 AM

I own many, well done John, congratulations...

Line Gauthier

Date: 1/4/2018 11:22:00 AM

Beautiful imagery evoked with your exquisitely well chosen words. Congrats on your win, John.

Paul Callus

Date: 1/4/2018 10:13:00 AM

This is very creative, John...a tribute to Rembrandt and the Renaissance. Congratulations on this high placement. Regards // paul

Silent One

Date: 1/4/2018 8:32:00 AM

This is clever.. Congratulations on your placement in the colours monoku contest

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/4/2018 1:10:00 AM

oh now THIS I sure do get!! It's so true!!

Judith S

Date: 1/3/2018 5:19:00 AM

LOVED this John!! Simple and lovely truth. Admittedly, I had to google the title :) Wellll ... I've learned a new word today!!! Good luck in the contest! ~Judy

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/2/2018 8:06:00 AM

Oh, so pretty! Nice one, John! Reminds me of an artist...we had asked about his children’s art and he said he’d look at it to see if it was refrigerator-worthy. Was a funny one. Blessed New Year, my creative friend!

John Lawless
Date: 1/2/2018 8:21:00 AM

thanks Kim, not sure how the title got included as part of the Monoku.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/2/2018 8:07:00 AM

The only thing I’d humbly recommend end is to get rid of the title in the body of your lovely poem.