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The Chasm

I knew I’d offended you, your smile of hurt, the one reserved for whipped spaniels; you use it too. We didn’t speak as we strolled through the woodland park , picking up acorns, dropped by passing tree top squirrels And when my hand brushed yours, you pulled away, like a nervous electric eel, stranded in the rainless mud I knew I’d offended you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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