The Chase

"the chase" some say the chase starts with a glance or stare waiting for each other visioning a moment to share others say the chase starts with a whisper of hello hoping for a greeting of good morning and afterglow you say the chase continues beautifully time after time making it a mission of hope with a mountain to climb I say what an adventure the chase has been thus far for the pursuit is nothing short of a shooting star whether glances whispers endless times or chance the chase for us is a life changing endless dance SkyWatcher 02-28-23

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Panagiota Romios

Date: 3/1/2023 10:20:00 AM

Beautifully done, Lisa. I am a big couplet fan.no fan of being an acrobat with other forms. Love the idea of an endless dance concept as well. A romantic creation indeed. Thanks for reading Senorita Sexy. Pamgie. Xxxooo

Lisa Ricci
Date: 3/1/2023 10:58:00 AM

Dear Pangie. It is I who thanks you. Truly. Thank you also for this generous and wonderful review and commentary to which I never take for granted. May all know of love and may all have love. Love and Blessings always. (smile) Have a great night.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/1/2023 2:35:00 AM

Pity we cannot have a dance,

Lisa Ricci
Date: 3/1/2023 2:42:00 AM

Good Morning Victor. Hi. Thank you Thank you. What a lovely comment. I consider your visit and your comment a gift Victor. Truly. May everyone experience a chase and may everyone know a dance. May today bring on everything good. Love and Blessings now and always. (smile) Thank you Victor.

Daniel Turner

Date: 2/28/2023 5:39:00 AM

Only if you catch the right dance partner. Some are only good for 1 or 2 dances:) I enjoyed this playful poem, Lisa.

Lisa Ricci
Date: 3/1/2023 2:13:00 AM

Good Morning Daniel. Thank you very much. And yes, if only it is with the right dance partner. I very much appreciate your intake and comments. Have a wonderful day and may the chase be right for one and all. Keep enjoying poetry and poetrysoup. (smile)