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The Chalice of Night

Pain pierces, like switch blades, within, I bleed, Howls of dry weary lands, in mind, I heed; Heart, haunted, endlessly hustles-bustles, Sleep so sleepless; fright in fearful puzzles; Love; its loss; its longing; long languishing, My chalice is bitter; peace-vanishing... I hate; yet, her face blows glows everywhere, Like fallen angel; grayish grave mirror; Broken into thousand cubes; she in each, Smiling, laughing; crying; with breach and bleach; Taunting, tearing, teasing abundantly, Pain of this bitter chalice sores bluntly... It's not like Jesus Christ choosing his cross, Nor like Sisyphus with boulder did toss; It’s a battle between me and my self, Worsened with her entry, like tight-locked shelf; Leave me, cheat, who, now, in another's hug, I'll drink this cup; die in the grave I've dug... 24 January 2022 The Chalice of Night Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Chantelle Anne Cooke

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Date: 1/25/2022 7:57:00 PM
As connie says, yes deep and dark indeed. i see it's a win. Big congrats to you, Chris.
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Date: 1/25/2022 3:39:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Dear Poet. Deep, dark, vividly descriptive - an amazing poem. Love and BW ~ Mala
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 1/25/2022 7:39:00 PM
Thank you very much.
Date: 1/25/2022 1:46:00 AM
This by itself was enough "I hate; yet, her face blows glows everywhere, Like fallen angel; grayish grave mirror; Broken into thousand cubes; she in each, Smiling, laughing; crying; with breach and bleach; Taunting, tearing, teasing abundantly, Pain of this bitter chalice sores bluntly..." The rest makes it a masterpiece.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 1/25/2022 4:36:00 AM
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Date: 1/24/2022 10:10:00 PM
Deep and dark Christuraj. Just as the contest called for. Congratulations on your wonderful win! Blessings xxoo
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 1/25/2022 4:36:00 AM
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Date: 1/24/2022 8:54:00 PM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 1/25/2022 4:36:00 AM
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Date: 1/24/2022 8:45:00 PM
Christuraj, CONGRATS on your win with this vividly descriptive piece about a tortured soul! Janice
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 1/25/2022 4:37:00 AM
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Date: 1/24/2022 8:33:00 PM
This is indeed great poetry ! Congratulations on your great win Chris !
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 1/25/2022 4:37:00 AM
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Date: 1/24/2022 6:58:00 PM
This is so deep and so sad Chris, I hope its a fictional expression, congratulations on your win,
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 1/25/2022 4:37:00 AM
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Date: 1/24/2022 12:28:00 PM
You rose well to the challenge Christuraj, a well composed verse, good luck in the contest. Tom
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Date: 1/24/2022 6:25:00 PM
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