The Chalice of Night

Pain pierces, like switch blades, within, I bleed, 
Howls of dry weary lands, in mind, I heed;
Heart, haunted, endlessly hustles-bustles,
Sleep so sleepless; fright in fearful puzzles; 
Love; its loss; its longing; long languishing,
My chalice is bitter; peace-vanishing...

I hate; yet, her face blows glows everywhere,
Like fallen angel; grayish grave mirror; 
Broken into thousand cubes; she in each,
Smiling, laughing; crying; with breach and bleach;
Taunting, tearing, teasing abundantly, 
Pain of this bitter chalice sores bluntly...

It's not like Jesus Christ choosing his cross,
Nor like Sisyphus with boulder did toss;
It’s a battle between me and my self,
Worsened with her entry, like tight-locked shelf;
Leave me, cheat, who, now, in another's hug,
I'll drink this cup; die in the grave I've dug...


24 January 2022 
The Chalice of Night Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Chantelle Anne Cooke
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Dietrich Avatar
January 25, 2022 at 7:57 PM
As connie says, yes deep and dark indeed. i see it's a win. Big congrats to you, Chris.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
January 25, 2022 at 3:39 PM
Congratulations on your win, Dear Poet. Deep, dark, vividly descriptive - an amazing poem. Love and BW ~ Mala
Alex Avatar
January 25, 2022 at 7:39 PM
Thank you very much.
Krutsinger Avatar
January 25, 2022 at 1:46 AM
This by itself was enough "I hate; yet, her face blows glows everywhere, Like fallen angel; grayish grave mirror; Broken into thousand cubes; she in each, Smiling, laughing; crying; with breach and bleach; Taunting, tearing, teasing abundantly, Pain of this bitter chalice sores bluntly..." The rest makes it a masterpiece.
Alex Avatar
January 25, 2022 at 4:36 AM
Thank you very much.
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 24, 2022 at 10:10 PM
Deep and dark Christuraj. Just as the contest called for. Congratulations on your wonderful win! Blessings xxoo
Alex Avatar
January 25, 2022 at 4:36 AM
Thank you very much.
Agustin Avatar
January 24, 2022 at 8:54 PM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
Alex Avatar
January 25, 2022 at 4:36 AM
Thank you very much.
Canerdy Avatar
January 24, 2022 at 8:45 PM
Christuraj, CONGRATS on your win with this vividly descriptive piece about a tortured soul! Janice
Alex Avatar
January 25, 2022 at 4:37 AM
Thank you very much.
George Avatar
January 24, 2022 at 8:33 PM
This is indeed great poetry ! Congratulations on your great win Chris !
Alex Avatar
January 25, 2022 at 4:37 AM
Thank you very much.
Rose  Avatar
January 24, 2022 at 6:58 PM
This is so deep and so sad Chris, I hope its a fictional expression, congratulations on your win,
Alex Avatar
January 25, 2022 at 4:37 AM
Thank you very much.
Cunningham Avatar
January 24, 2022 at 12:28 PM
You rose well to the challenge Christuraj, a well composed verse, good luck in the contest. Tom
Alex Avatar
January 24, 2022 at 6:25 PM
Thank you very much.
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