Cecil Hickman Poet Choka

The Chair

Darkness surrounds me
Memories of days past haunt
Existence as known
Gathering dust seems
Little penance for my life
Service I performed
Should I just whither
Crumble my stance to the floor
Will I be rescued?


written for
Sponsor ^Rick Parise 
Contest Name CHAIR IN SHADOWED ROOM - CHOKA FORM

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Carol Sunshine Brown June 9, 2011 at 10:16 AM Congratulations on a well deserved win in ^Rick Parise's "Chair In A Shadowed Room" contest Cecil. Love, Carol

Joe Maverick June 8, 2011 at 1:31 PM I think this an rich poem Cecil, and my congratulations on the win.

Robert A. Dufresne June 8, 2011 at 5:03 AM Such an elegant chair embodying such memories shall indeed be passed on to any one of a number of rescuers. Great poem Cecil. Congrats to you

Linda-Marie Sweetheart June 7, 2011 at 9:16 PM Congrats Cecil on your winning poem in Rick's contest with this unique write on the chair photo luv..enjoy..my friend..

Andrea Dietrich June 7, 2011 at 8:18 PM Congratulations in this contest, Cecil. It's always nice for me to see your poems!

Dr.Ram Mehta June 7, 2011 at 6:39 PM My congratulations on the win in the contest of rick, cecil

Kyle Kriticos June 5, 2011 at 10:29 PM Wow I didn't see the picture that this was written in relation to, but I definately LOVE it!

Dr.Ram Mehta June 5, 2011 at 6:26 PM Wonderful read of the picture in the contest, cecil Cecil Hickman June 5, 2011 at 7:03 PM Thank You for visiting my words so steady and for leaving your words behind,,hopefully as the summer progresses a little more I shall have the time to read and comment as it is I barely have the time to write anything at all,,,Blessings..Cecil

Linda-Marie Sweetheart June 5, 2011 at 4:48 PM a fabulous write Cecil .. awesome interpretation of the photo for the contest..good luck my friend with luv.. splendid premise.. Cecil Hickman June 5, 2011 at 7:01 PM as always I do indeed want to Thank You for reading and commenting on my pieces,,I wish I had more time though to read more poetry here as in yours and many others,,and especially the time to comment upon the works of beauty, strength, that all make available,,,Blessings..Cecil