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The Cemetery At the Old Home Place

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The dusty road is now black topped Windows can be opened to let in plenty of clean fresh air though no house stands chosen The fence still stands in some places The pasture filled with trees Our large garden spot overgrown Once gathered in no breeze Memories happy and unpleasant Flood my memory banks Thoughts of the graveyard flow Overgrown with vines or blank? Is the path clear of those briars Or overgrown with vines? Those wild grape and honeysuckle Can wrap, entwine sometimes Grasping handle of the car door Seemed to be drawn that way Dusk slowly creeps and pulls me north With just a flashlight sway To see the graves of my loved ones At 'twilight's quiet time Though brambles and strong briars Strains weakening heart's lifetime In the morning's brilliant sunrise The flashlight did no good She was found among the brambles Near a grave that stood Erect with her name engraved The date that she was born Also the date she died beside That day she was reborn Proud~ free from the overgrown vines Cleared at the edge of woods The visit was her next to last Buried now in those backwoods Written: October 4, 2016, Rewritten: October 05, 2016 Inspired by Broken Wings' Contest Overgrown With Vines and "Scare Me Good Contest" Irregular syllable count~~ Poetic License

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Date: 10/17/2016 6:39:00 AM
wow, you painted a great picture here, my friend
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/17/2016 8:07:00 AM
I knew that you and some would like the Halloween touch added to this one..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Date: 10/6/2016 5:04:00 PM
This was quite haunting and beautiful at the same time. Such an eerie feel to this but somehow comforting as well. Wonderfully crafted.
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Date: 10/17/2016 8:07:00 AM
Thanks for the nice review of my work..Your presence at my work is appreciated..Sara
Date: 10/6/2016 2:22:00 PM
I can truly visualize this scene and feel the sentimentality along with it. Really nice. Love brambles and briars.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/6/2016 3:48:00 PM
Thanks for the nice review of my work..I am glad that I brought it to life so that you could visualize the scene..I appreciate the time spent here reading and commenting on my work..Sara
Date: 10/6/2016 6:55:00 AM
Excellent. an interesting poem with heartfelt write. Enjoyed reading it.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/6/2016 1:45:00 PM
Thank you for the rating of excellent!! I am glad that you enjoyed reading my work.. Sara
Date: 10/5/2016 6:02:00 PM
A heartfelt write Sara...Beautifully written...hugs
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/6/2016 6:50:00 AM
Joseph, I see you saw the heartfelt side of this one..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Date: 10/5/2016 4:34:00 PM
Sara, this has tremendous imagery. A creepy kind of feeling. however, I super enjoyed the poem. Good luck in the contest. LINDA
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/6/2016 6:49:00 AM
Well, since it is the Halloween season creepy can be kind of good..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Date: 10/5/2016 10:20:00 AM
Very different piece. Flow is very smooth from top to bottom. Enjoyed. A7................//hugs
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Date: 10/6/2016 6:48:00 AM
Thanks for rating my poem and at such a high rate..I appreciate the time spent here..Sara

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