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The Cemetery At the Old Home Place

The dusty road is now black topped
Windows can be opened
to let in plenty of clean fresh air
though no house stands chosen

The fence still stands in some places
The pasture filled with trees
Our large garden spot overgrown
Once gathered in no breeze

Memories happy and unpleasant
Flood my memory banks
Thoughts of the graveyard flow
Overgrown with vines or blank?

Is the path  clear of those briars
Or overgrown with vines?
Those wild grape and honeysuckle
Can wrap, entwine sometimes

Grasping handle of the car door
Seemed to be drawn that way
Dusk slowly creeps and pulls me north
With just a flashlight sway

To see the graves of my loved ones
At  'twilight's quiet  time
Though brambles and strong briars 
Strains weakening heart's lifetime

In the morning's brilliant sunrise
The flashlight did no good
She was found among the brambles
Near a grave that stood

Erect with her name engraved
The date that she was born
Also the date she died beside
That day she was reborn

Proud~ free from the overgrown vines
Cleared at the edge of woods
The visit was her next to last 
Buried now in those backwoods

Written: October 4, 2016, Rewritten: October 05, 2016
Inspired by Broken Wings' Contest Overgrown With Vines and 
"Scare Me Good Contest"

Irregular syllable count~~ Poetic License
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Horne Avatar
October 17, 2016 at 6:39 AM
wow, you painted a great picture here, my friend
Kendrick Avatar
October 17, 2016 at 8:07 AM
I knew that you and some would like the Halloween touch added to this one..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Green Avatar
October 6, 2016 at 5:04 PM
This was quite haunting and beautiful at the same time. Such an eerie feel to this but somehow comforting as well. Wonderfully crafted.
Kendrick Avatar
October 17, 2016 at 8:07 AM
Thanks for the nice review of my work..Your presence at my work is appreciated..Sara
P  Avatar
October 6, 2016 at 2:22 PM
I can truly visualize this scene and feel the sentimentality along with it. Really nice. Love brambles and briars.
Kendrick Avatar
October 6, 2016 at 3:48 PM
Thanks for the nice review of my work..I am glad that I brought it to life so that you could visualize the scene..I appreciate the time spent here reading and commenting on my work..Sara
Sathasivam Avatar
October 6, 2016 at 6:55 AM
Excellent. an interesting poem with heartfelt write. Enjoyed reading it.
Kendrick Avatar
October 6, 2016 at 1:45 PM
Thank you for the rating of excellent!! I am glad that you enjoyed reading my work.. Sara
May Avatar
October 5, 2016 at 6:02 PM
A heartfelt write Sara...Beautifully written...hugs
Kendrick Avatar
October 6, 2016 at 6:50 AM
Joseph, I see you saw the heartfelt side of this one..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
A   Avatar
October 5, 2016 at 4:34 PM
Sara, this has tremendous imagery. A creepy kind of feeling. however, I super enjoyed the poem. Good luck in the contest. LINDA
Kendrick Avatar
October 6, 2016 at 6:49 AM
Well, since it is the Halloween season creepy can be kind of good..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Dalei Avatar
October 5, 2016 at 10:20 AM
Very different piece. Flow is very smooth from top to bottom. Enjoyed. A7................//hugs
Kendrick Avatar
October 6, 2016 at 6:48 AM
Thanks for rating my poem and at such a high rate..I appreciate the time spent here..Sara
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