The Celery Fields

(One of my rare attempts at macaronic writing--the reasons for it may be found in the context of the poem.  Only a smattering of knowledge of Spanish is needed)

Madre de Dios! Morning already?
The mud, still damp upon my pantalones--
how can I face another day?
My niña is so thin.
Two little oranges are not enough for her,
before she rides the bus to the escuela.
I must work harder, still--
hacer algunos dollars more
hacer su vida para el mejor,
si puedo.

I remember
when like my niña, I was young..
We did not work so hard,
y sobre las alturas
every breeze was cool...
not like this steaming
California campo
by the sea.

I remember, as we worked,
how we were singing,
'De la sierra morena, Cieli...'
Now there is no heart, no time to sing.
El jefe blanco will be angry
if I make him late.

The sun is high upon this field.
My back hurts me so much
from bending. Ay!
En muchas horas I can sleep again
and stop remembering.
Jesús amado, en mi sueño
solamente, take me home
...............
to my brown mountain.
       ~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Austin Avatar
August 7, 2012 at 11:53 AM
Reminds me of Harry Belafonte and Cotton Fields Down Home. Tengo unas pocas palabras. This probably isn't correct. I was lousy at Spaniosh. Enjoyed this write - as with all your efforts - muchissimo! daver
Ludden Avatar
August 7, 2012 at 12:07 PM
Thank you. I am glad you are reading them, and would appreciate more comments from you.
Mac Donald Avatar
August 7, 2012 at 11:16 AM
Ah, this is fluid and if I've missed out on a word or two, it is still wields an emotional punch! A very touching write, Dean. that expels heartache and loss. I will think of macaronic writing, for this moving write teaches it so very well!! Best wishes, Mikki
Ludden Avatar
August 7, 2012 at 11:20 AM
I don't think that it teaches it so much as it exploits it. Do let me know of any words you missed out. I want this one to be very clear.
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