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The Cave

For an instant, one spark can light up the cave where memories hide Some that were saved from moments that died Once painted by darkness they will shine like a star Shooting star moments we dimly recall They'll scurry away In a hurry they're gone to crawl backwards in time deep into the core swallowed once more by the dark of the lime __________________________________ 8/5/16 Inspired by the contest: "Caves" Sponsor: Anthony Slausen

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Date: 8/8/2016 10:57:00 AM
I'm back, congratulations...
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Date: 8/7/2016 12:47:00 PM
Congrats on your win xxxxxxx
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Date: 8/7/2016 10:49:00 AM
Carrie, congrats on your awesome win lady :)-luloo
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Date: 8/7/2016 10:18:00 AM
Lovely poem, Carrie. Congratulations on your 3rd Place podium win in the 'caves' Premiere Contest! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 8/6/2016 11:21:00 AM
Great poem well written x
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Date: 8/6/2016 8:38:00 AM
My muse went lame on this theme, penning a write sure NOT to win, but your muse found a poetic stance in a cave where great lines aplenty were born. This is great, Carrie ... CayCay
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Date: 8/5/2016 5:17:00 PM
This is a little off your well beaten path Carrie, but a good solid write all the same, some great metaphores and lines that want to rhyme, but unusually don't....it's kind of hypnotic the flow....well done, and good luck......Ian
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Date: 8/5/2016 4:56:00 PM
Well written great poem xx
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Date: 8/5/2016 2:26:00 PM
Absolutely great entry Carrie, I'l be back to congratulate you later...
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