The Cat

I slipped into the room since I was so curious
     But then I found the truth of the room to be spurious.

     The door had closed and there I was
     More afraid of that room than of a hornet's buzz.

     I darted about without a thought
     Of what my long tail hitting one of them might have wrought.

     But the window was there and perhaps an escape
     From this room...this doom...this terrible scrape.

     Alas it was closed so my escape route gone
     So many thoughts raced through my head from there on.

     I had to hope for someone to come in
     That my escape out the door that was closed might begin.

     To get to that door though, I had to cross the room
     I'd prefer to ride on that old witch's broom.

     So afraid of that room had I become
     I started meowing for someone to come.

     As I sat and meowed and waited with fear
     No footsteps outside the room did I hear.

     Never again, as I meowed in vain
     Would I ever want to find a room with this bane.

     This one room made me a nervous wreck
     Next time I promised not to stick out my neck.      
   
     For here I was, just a long tailed but curious cat
     In a room full of rocking chairs...trying to scat.


The expression is: "More nervous that a long tailed cat in a room full of rocking chairs".
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Dietrich Avatar
September 10, 2010 at 10:38 PM
very cute and unique write, Daniel. congratulatoins to you. Luv, Andrea
Brown Avatar
September 9, 2010 at 11:30 AM
Congratulations Daniel on your win in Joe Flach's contest "In Other Words". Love, Carol
Johnson Avatar
September 3, 2010 at 7:55 PM
sThat expression is new to me but your poem sure fit. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Roberts Avatar
September 3, 2010 at 5:47 PM
lol, cute one, congrats on your HM
Mehta Avatar
September 3, 2010 at 5:16 PM
Congratulations for the win with this fine poem, Daniel
Sweetheart Avatar
September 3, 2010 at 4:05 PM
Congrats Dan on your HM in Joe's contest... a wonderful write and win.. enjoy your special honor my friiend..with luv..
Kendrick Avatar
September 1, 2010 at 4:12 PM
Like the metaphoric languaged used in this one..I have heard this saying all of my married life..But I have seen a cat move his tail to the rhythm of the rocking chair..Enjoyed reading this one and glad that I chose it..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
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August 21, 2010 at 7:33 PM
Dear Daniel, my cats would scratch the doors leaving big scrapes. They always got their way when they wanted to go in or out, needless to say. I was at their mercy. Very cute poem! If this is for Joe's contest, I wish you success. Love, Carolyn
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August 20, 2010 at 4:03 PM
my husband says sore tailed cat---well written-Wow what words woven where wit was working!!
A   Avatar
August 20, 2010 at 1:20 PM
nice flow of rhyming,, interesting and cool write,, enjoyed..P.D.
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