Sotto Poet Poet Free verse

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The Castle

Castle

many rooms
but there seems to be no room
for my affection for you
Inside.

But I built 

It's a castle 
a lofty, gauzy place
to keep my aspirations high
among clouds

It seems

my dream location 
Is enraptured in your arms
safe and sensual 
homey and content

during storms
lightning and lull

during gloomy clouds 
I watch my every move
I let the rain fall as 
facing the sky
soak me.

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Linda Alice Fowler August 30, 2022 at 9:13 AM Very beautiful and romantic Lasaad. A pleasure to read :) Linda

Victor Buhagiar August 28, 2022 at 2:42 AM Enjoyed this romantic verse.

Valsa George August 27, 2022 at 8:59 PM "But I built / It's a castle/ a lofty, gauzy place/ to keep my aspirations high among clouds...... How wonderful it would be if your beloved comes to share that castle with you ! Enjoyed this poem of romantic longing !

Susan Ashley August 27, 2022 at 7:14 PM Dear Lasaad, the romantic, yearning beauty of your poem's imagery thrills my heart's imagination. Lush emotions so wonderfully expressed! Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan

Darlene De Beaulieu August 27, 2022 at 3:30 PM Hello Sotto Poet, a castle in the sky. I se them often. Big ones and small. A very romantic poem. Enjoy your evening my friend.

Vijay Pandit August 27, 2022 at 3:22 PM I hear the voice of longing for the beloved. Enjoyed the romantic tenor of your write, Lasaad.