The Castle

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Castle many rooms but there seems to be no room for my affection for you Inside. But I built It's a castle a lofty, gauzy place to keep my aspirations high among clouds It seems my dream location Is enraptured in your arms safe and sensual homey and content during storms lightning and lull during gloomy clouds I watch my every move I let the rain fall as facing the sky soak me.

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 8/30/2022 9:13:00 AM

Very beautiful and romantic Lasaad. A pleasure to read :) Linda

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/28/2022 2:42:00 AM

Enjoyed this romantic verse.

Valsa George

Date: 8/27/2022 8:59:00 PM

"But I built / It's a castle/ a lofty, gauzy place/ to keep my aspirations high among clouds...... How wonderful it would be if your beloved comes to share that castle with you ! Enjoyed this poem of romantic longing !

Susan Ashley

Date: 8/27/2022 7:14:00 PM

Dear Lasaad, the romantic, yearning beauty of your poem's imagery thrills my heart's imagination. Lush emotions so wonderfully expressed! Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 8/27/2022 3:30:00 PM

Hello Sotto Poet, a castle in the sky. I se them often. Big ones and small. A very romantic poem. Enjoy your evening my friend.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/27/2022 3:22:00 PM

I hear the voice of longing for the beloved. Enjoyed the romantic tenor of your write, Lasaad.