The Case of the Second Jacket

Double checking that my keys are in my zone of proximity,
Has saved me and my family from wasted brain activity,
Except when I have had to save the day with my hunting ability,
To avoid a period of instability.

Such an occasion happened when I was working,
Finding my jacket missing one morning,
I took another jacket instead of wasting time looking,
Little knowing the mix up this would be causing.

At the end of they day on reaching for my jacket,
I found my keys missing from its pocket,
And I was soon building up a sweat,
As I was supposed to be taking my wife out for a treat.

With hope of finding my keys receding,
It was my wife I was ringing,
For the spare car keys to be bringing.

While waiting, I was slowing down my brain activity,
And reassessing my hunting strategy,
When I thought of another possibility,
Could I have 2 jackets at the same facility.

My wife arrived, just as I found the keys that were missing,
She did not find the situation  at all surprising,
Her faith in my hunting ability uncompromising.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 7/16/2019 3:45:00 AM
Happens to me all the time dear David! Exceptionally written. Thank you for the good news my dearest friend. Thank God. Forty years ago the doctor gave me nine months to live , obviously our Lord knows best! Bless you my friend!
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Date: 7/16/2019 6:24:00 AM
I really enjoyed writing this one. Thank you for your kind words Demetrios. Very glad you were granted an extension to your life. David
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