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The Carpenter

He came over and over I served dinner, even wine he screwed me and the wine well he uncorked the wine fixed a squeaky door after the wine that fixed my little heart just fine all his screwing around was so romantic that afterwards we kissed

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Date: 3/22/2024 6:16:00 AM
A little dance, a night of romance - sounds like a song in there. ;) Clever and cute Aurore. :)
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Date: 2/3/2024 3:56:00 PM
Hello Aurore, oh! A romance. So romantic. Enjoy your weekend. Hugs. /Darlene/
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Date: 1/30/2024 8:24:00 AM
Well, this leaves questions in my mind so great poetry. Thank you for sharing it and for dropping by my page. Sara K
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Date: 10/24/2023 2:54:00 PM
Gets things done. Everybody happy, lappy. Love it! :D
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Date: 10/24/2023 5:13:00 AM
Too much squeaking :) You had a lovely night. Blessings.
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Date: 10/23/2023 2:48:00 PM
Haha Aurore thats a wee bit naughty!! So cleverly written and funny….made me smile! and blush hehe ( joking about the blush ha) ….Debx
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Date: 10/23/2023 4:45:00 AM
lol that sounds like a screwy evening of pleasure and fun, who would not have a smile on their face after that !
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Date: 10/22/2023 5:59:00 PM
simply adorable. poem, enjoyed poet yann
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Date: 10/21/2023 6:22:00 AM
Lovely. Romantic, I think. Thanks
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Date: 10/21/2023 6:11:00 AM
Aurore, your words had me bursting into fits of laughter, thoroughly amused by the smart innuendo cleverly embedded in the very first line.
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Date: 10/21/2023 5:49:00 AM
Oh Aurore you had me giggling at this one i love the innuendo especially in the first line lol :-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/21/2023 12:48:00 AM
Just a little humorous write, romance is how we help each other and how we laugh together, xoxo peace and love.
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