Aurore Severo Poet Free verse

The Carpenter

He came over and over
I served dinner, even wine
he screwed me and the wine
well he uncorked the wine
fixed a squeaky door after the wine
that fixed my little heart just fine
all his screwing around was so romantic
that afterwards
we kissed

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Linda Alice Fowler March 22, 2024 at 6:16 AM A little dance, a night of romance - sounds like a song in there. ;) Clever and cute Aurore. :)

Darlene De Beaulieu February 3, 2024 at 3:56 PM Hello Aurore, oh! A romance. So romantic. Enjoy your weekend. Hugs. /Darlene/

Sara Kendrick January 30, 2024 at 8:24 AM Well, this leaves questions in my mind so great poetry. Thank you for sharing it and for dropping by my page. Sara K

I Am Anaya October 24, 2023 at 2:54 PM Gets things done. Everybody happy, lappy. Love it! :D

Victor Buhagiar October 24, 2023 at 5:13 AM Too much squeaking :) You had a lovely night. Blessings.

Deb M October 23, 2023 at 2:48 PM Haha Aurore thats a wee bit naughty!! So cleverly written and funny….made me smile! and blush hehe ( joking about the blush ha) ….Debx

Mystic Rose Rose October 23, 2023 at 4:45 AM lol that sounds like a screwy evening of pleasure and fun, who would not have a smile on their face after that !

Yann Rolland October 22, 2023 at 5:59 PM simply adorable. poem, enjoyed poet yann

Jeff Connelly October 21, 2023 at 6:22 AM Lovely. Romantic, I think. Thanks Aurore Severo September 22, 2024 at 2:14 AM I hope so!!!! thanks!

Sotto Poet October 21, 2023 at 6:11 AM Aurore, your words had me bursting into fits of laughter, thoroughly amused by the smart innuendo cleverly embedded in the very first line. Aurore Severo September 22, 2024 at 2:14 AM Very kind thanks!

Jan Allison October 21, 2023 at 5:49 AM Oh Aurore you had me giggling at this one i love the innuendo especially in the first line lol :-) hugs Jan xx Aurore Severo September 22, 2024 at 2:13 AM Thank you :)

Aurore Severo October 21, 2023 at 12:48 AM Just a little humorous write, romance is how we help each other and how we laugh together, xoxo peace and love.