The Carousel

The Carousel As I watch my carousel standing still my only dwell In the vortex of its spell convoluted in my only yell My mind falls in its wake cadent circles that forsake I sliver with the snake leaving ruins with heartache *** My eyes shut to the I, spinning thoughts will awry Languishing lips calcify upon lost imagery to crucify Round & round they go dissolving dreams I borrow Happiness says hell-lo as it leaves me in its shadow *** Hurricane of my abyss telling secrets that I shall miss In their blasphemous bliss, morbid storms reminisce Reaching terminal velocity amidst its ill monstrosity Carousel of curiosity drowning in dynamic viscosity *** An elliptical awareness melds allusions of unfairness Within a secluded rareness posturing, you defenseless A salivating swell with sorrows that comply & compel For my none-stop Carousel the merry-go-round of hell. Nov.23.2018 The I Of The Storm Sponsored by: Maureen McGreavy Placed 4'th...thank you
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Barden Avatar
December 11, 2018 at 11:47 PM
Best wishes and sincere congratulations for your win in Maureen's contest, ^WW^ - keep up the great work, and I hope you and yours have a wonderful holiday season! :-)
Nicole Avatar
December 11, 2018 at 12:32 PM
I have been watching from a distance, this ride swirling out of control. Moments are slowing down now- so I am able to congratulate you on this win, my Warrior with Wings. Hopefully you can sit still, for a few. Love and Merry-go-round moments. :) Brandy
Gauthier Avatar
December 10, 2018 at 9:05 PM
Awesome poem, WW. Congrats on a most deserving win.
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 26, 2018 at 8:12 PM
Hello Winged Warror, a merry go-round of hell?I like the the carousel. Why is the ride hell? Have a nice evening my friend.
One Avatar
November 25, 2018 at 8:45 AM
Damn... great lines WW...
Vaso Avatar
November 25, 2018 at 4:07 AM
Loved this, the last line, well the last 2 lines together brought it all together for me!
Onclaud Avatar
November 24, 2018 at 2:18 PM
this carousel of despair, darkness portrays the depth of your pen, WW... take a bow!...huggs
Messina Avatar
November 24, 2018 at 8:39 AM
We've all been on that carousel ride before. I think. Well, I certainly have. Amazing poetry WW...Love & Peace...Charlie
Nicole Avatar
November 23, 2018 at 3:32 PM
Hmmm, I think I will pass on this ride, on that Carousel. Doesn't sound swell to me at all. But then again- I am not one to spin in darkness. Not in this way, anyway. :) Yikes. Once again, you create a whirlwind of emotions with your words. Well done my friend. ~ Brandy
Cunningham Avatar
November 23, 2018 at 3:19 PM
Brilliant verse W.W. Your last line sums it up. Great track to accompany it. Good luck . Tom.
Salehi Avatar
November 23, 2018 at 2:47 PM
Magnificent poetry... beautiful everything else...
Blown Avatar
November 23, 2018 at 2:08 PM
we share music favorites : ) so i'll try to speak in parallels...thrown to the caustic ground...nightmares...wicked witch's dragon vultures...life's like that : )
Sands Avatar
November 23, 2018 at 1:50 PM
What a powerful ending! Masterful writing again WW. Well done :)
Gauthier Avatar
November 23, 2018 at 1:15 PM
Wow - an awesome take on the challenge, WW. Bravo.
Green Avatar
November 23, 2018 at 1:02 PM
Wow, a merry-go-round of hell, I would think it would be a misery-go-round. :) Nicely done my friend. Best of luck in the contest
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