The Caring Blues

The caring of such 
beauty in her heart 
is to distress and 
die without 
warning or notice, 
to live a life 
without happiness, 
to see her happy 
and her heart sing 
with another.

The caring is such 
a devilish respect 
you have for 
someone who 
looks at you, like a 
statue,
but without love,
what good does it 
do.

Caring is a song,
that a nightingale 
sings to a 
lonesome heart in 
the midst of 
twilight,
when all is lost,
a shoulder to cry 
on,
a heart and soul to 
comfort.

But, in the end,
when all is lost for 
you,
when you're down 
in the dumps and 
have the blues,
it always seems 
that those faces 
you once cared for,
never show up,
before the crack of 
a neck, the cut of a 
wrist,
or even the pull of 
a pistol's steely 
trigger,
gone, black, 
goodnight.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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June 29, 2014 at 8:28 AM
Sadly beautiful Chris..You make me want to cry...so soft and flowing so well my brother. Damn women !!
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