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The Cardinal and the Rose

Cardinal, a bird of all seasons was seen flying in a cloak of feathers in flaming red and a small crest upon his head. He looked an enchanting sight, in the blue panorama of the sky amid curling clouds and blurring mist. As he soared, he was piping joyful melodies Suddenly he swooped down, into my little garden, where exotic flowers ooze out a rare fragrance, where I stood unseen inebriated, under the tiara of blossoms. The cardinal without second thoughts alighted on a tall growing rose bush where a red rose stood smiling, awashed in morning dew. Between them, there was a hushed whisper Is it the red color common in both that conjoined them in love all at once? With wind’s exciting whips and sunbeams’ sudden slips, I saw him kissing hard upon her dewy lips. In embarrassment, other flowers turned their demure faces away! Jan.8.2023 The Cardinal and the Rose Poetry Contest Sponsor- craig cornish

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Date: 1/9/2023 1:02:00 PM
This is such a creative poem and unique take on the subject, Valsa! Beautifully written! :)
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Date: 1/9/2023 8:52:00 AM
Oh, this is SO delightful. That ending is superb!!
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Date: 1/9/2023 2:31:00 AM
Dear Valsa, I cannot but admire your verses. One of the greatest on the soup. Your imagery is perfect.
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Date: 1/8/2023 7:17:00 PM
"In embarrassment, other flowers turned their demure faces away!" Lovely personification. The entire poem perfectly charming.
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Date: 1/8/2023 10:04:00 AM
Valsa, you did an excellent job of seizing the moment, and I adore the vivid images that you paint with your words. A poem that reflects on the exquisiteness of natural settings. Good luck in the contest!
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Date: 1/8/2023 6:10:00 AM
Moments well captured, Valsa. A poem dwelling in nature's beauty. Best to you my friend.
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Date: 1/8/2023 4:19:00 AM
Wow! That's a beautiful thought, Valsa:)
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Date: 1/8/2023 2:16:00 AM
You captured the scene well Valsa, love the imagery you paint with your words. Best of luck in the contest. Hope you're having a lovely weekend. Tom
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