The Cardinal and the Rose

Cardinal, a bird of all seasons was seen flying
in a cloak of feathers in flaming red 
and a small crest upon his head. 
He looked an enchanting sight, 
in the blue panorama of the sky 
amid curling clouds and blurring mist.

As he soared, he was piping joyful melodies 

Suddenly he swooped down, into my little garden, 
where exotic flowers ooze out a rare fragrance, 
where I stood unseen inebriated, under the tiara of blossoms.

The cardinal without second thoughts
alighted on a tall growing rose bush
where a red rose stood smiling, awashed in morning dew.
Between them, there was a hushed whisper

Is it the red color common in both
that conjoined them in love all at once?
With wind’s exciting whips and sunbeams’ sudden slips,
I saw him kissing hard upon her dewy lips.

In embarrassment, other flowers
turned their demure faces away!

Jan.8.2023

The Cardinal and the Rose Poetry Contest
Sponsor- craig cornish
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Leiser Avatar
January 9, 2023 at 1:02 PM
This is such a creative poem and unique take on the subject, Valsa! Beautifully written! :)
Dietrich Avatar
January 9, 2023 at 8:52 AM
Oh, this is SO delightful. That ending is superb!!
Buhagiar Avatar
January 9, 2023 at 2:31 AM
Dear Valsa, I cannot but admire your verses. One of the greatest on the soup. Your imagery is perfect.
DiMino Avatar
January 8, 2023 at 7:17 PM
"In embarrassment, other flowers turned their demure faces away!" Lovely personification. The entire poem perfectly charming.
Poet Avatar
January 8, 2023 at 10:04 AM
Valsa, you did an excellent job of seizing the moment, and I adore the vivid images that you paint with your words. A poem that reflects on the exquisiteness of natural settings. Good luck in the contest!
Pandit Avatar
January 8, 2023 at 6:10 AM
Moments well captured, Valsa. A poem dwelling in nature's beauty. Best to you my friend.
Daniel Avatar
January 8, 2023 at 4:19 AM
Wow! That's a beautiful thought, Valsa:)
Cunningham Avatar
January 8, 2023 at 2:16 AM
You captured the scene well Valsa, love the imagery you paint with your words. Best of luck in the contest. Hope you're having a lovely weekend. Tom
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