Get Your Premium Membership

The Card

A friend has left without a word his soul slipped out last night. The illness laid his body waste but not without a fight. Prayers were sent with loving thought but more I meant to say. To use the phone and speak hello or visit one fine day. The time had come with mind made up to let him know I cared. With pen to card a loving note my friendship I declared. The envelope was licked and sealed this time I would not fail It wanted nothing more to send just address for the mail A common friend I sought for help and quickly he replied No need for card or phone calls now our friend this morning died. With nothing left to do or say I sat in silence deep My efforts late to no avail my heart began to weep Our worlds move on in separate paths so busy every day Consumed by self we shuffle on with words we meant to say But time won’t pause not even once and cards are left unread. Chances slip away for good and leave regrets instead.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 11/10/2013 2:48:00 PM
I like this one...
Login to Reply
Date: 11/9/2013 9:22:00 AM
Came back to see if you posted a new poem. I hope you are enjoying your time on the soup..
Login to Reply
Curtis Avatar
John Curtis
Date: 11/10/2013 3:51:00 PM
Thank you Richard. This is a great place to read and submit poetry. Everyone has been so welcoming and kind.
Date: 11/8/2013 10:44:00 PM
This is sad and moving. I'm sure your friend is looking down and is pleased by this heart felt piece. Welcome to the soup, I think you will fit in nicely.
Login to Reply
Date: 11/7/2013 10:17:00 PM
Hi John, this is a feeling I know very well..., Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
Login to Reply
Curtis Avatar
John Curtis
Date: 11/8/2013 9:11:00 AM
Thank you for your note Skat. Everyone has been very welcoming including yourself!
Date: 11/7/2013 2:39:00 PM
hello, John very deep for a first poem,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
Login to Reply
Curtis Avatar
John Curtis
Date: 11/7/2013 3:43:00 PM
Thank you Linda :)
Date: 11/7/2013 12:55:00 PM
- Welcome to P-Soup, John ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more.... another day :) - oxox / /Anne-Lise :)
Login to Reply
Curtis Avatar
John Curtis
Date: 11/7/2013 3:45:00 PM
Thank you for the kind greeting Anne Lise. I look forward to being a part of this community.

Book: Reflection on the Important Things