The Canal

The Canal
	Pollock painted pathways
	Jagged edged, reaching to infinity
	Artfully designed
	In perspective 
	With purple and yellow blotches
	On the grassy bank.
	Faeces placed with little thought
	By seagulls, swans,
	Ducks and dogs 
	All make their mark
	Creating an asphalt masterpiece.
	Crook-backed, 
	A recreant rook is perched aloft,
	Eyes on fire, a shining cloak of black,
	Surveying the unfinished canvas
	Down below,
	Perhaps to add a forgotten brushstroke.
	The canal
	Marches onward
	One bridge at a time.
	On reflection
	The stippled surface
	A crusted skin of
	Black and tan,
	Silver and grey
	Tries, at least,
	To bid farewell to another winter.
	Upside-down people amble
	The path above
	Whilst mid-way, 
	Huddled clumps of gold bring brightness
	To a morbid
	Sullen day.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 10/13/2020 8:11:00 AM
Vivid imagery through out your poem... You captured the morbid feeling well here..
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