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The Camera's Eye

One blinding light will freeze the frame unraveling time, rewinding… Stopped in it’s tracks, this moment's flight swift wings of the clock, are lying Each moment that ticks reminding how speed of light, has darted… The future and past aligning in one flashblub glimpse, now parted Inspired by Nette's Contest "Hutain This One" By Carrie Richards 7/26/11

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/22/2011 12:30:00 PM

Dear Carrie, some folks believe the past and present co-exist together. Surely there are moments when our mind clicks on a special event and we keep it in our hearts forever. A very compelling write. Congratulations on your big win in Brian's contest! Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/22/2011 12:05:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Your Choice Verse" contest Carrie. Love, Carol

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 11/21/2011 4:32:00 AM

Congrats on your win x

Joseph Osita

Date: 11/21/2011 4:25:00 AM

congrats on your first place win in the contest

Margaret Foster

Date: 11/21/2011 1:14:00 AM

Congratulations Carrie. A well deserved top place with this gem. Well done...Margaret

Bob Quigley

Date: 11/20/2011 10:04:00 PM

A well deserved first place with this one Carrie. Congratulations

J. Dover

Date: 11/20/2011 8:15:00 PM

You're amazing! I had to read this twice to catch all of it- that's how you know a good writer :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/20/2011 6:49:00 PM

Congrats Carrie on first place win .. another dtnamic write luv..

John Freeman

Date: 11/20/2011 4:28:00 PM

Great and unique verse Carrie, Congrats on your worthy present in Brian's awesome contest. Agape, Moses

Joyce Johnson

Date: 11/20/2011 3:58:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in lBrian's contest. Gerat writing. Love, Joyce

Lee Ramage

Date: 8/4/2011 8:16:00 PM

Excellent poem. Well done. Congratulations on your win. Lee

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/4/2011 1:28:00 PM

Congratulations on the third place win in the contest of nette,carrie

Jack Horne

Date: 8/4/2011 11:36:00 AM

Wow, so many contest results again! Many congrats for all your wins : )

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/4/2011 9:19:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in Nette's "Hutain" contest Carrie. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/3/2011 11:35:00 PM

Great idea your topic was, Carrie. Loved how you ended this one. And congrats in the contest.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 8/3/2011 8:04:00 PM

Loved the "flashblub glimpse" Congrad's on your win! Light & Love

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 8/3/2011 6:46:00 PM

congrats on your win in the contest, great interpretation of the image...

Caryl Ramsdale

Date: 8/3/2011 3:18:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in the HUTAIN THIS ONE...contest sponsored by Nette Onclaud. Love this theme you chose. Good job! Blessings, Caryl

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/3/2011 2:51:00 PM

Congrats Carrie on your exciting third place in Hutain contest with this prolific poetry luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/27/2011 8:20:00 AM

May your inspiration be long lived and your life be filled with many wonderful years of writing and of sharing your excellent poetry. I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Carrie. Love, Carol

Jack Ross Jr.

Date: 7/26/2011 10:02:00 PM

insightful write esp. about the speed of light.....good luck on contest....God bless....Old Jack