Barbara Gorelick Poet Light Verse

The California Poppy

Orange glowing in a field of green
Or along a mountain side.
Silky petals reach toward the sun
And dance in the spring breeze.
At night they cup their faces
Conserving strength for tomorrow.

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James Fraser June 14, 2009 at 11:41 AM Its nice to see the poppy likened to the lovely flower it, rather than the drug link. Nice read>James

L'Nass Shango April 16, 2009 at 10:18 AM I have missed a lot by not discovering this earlier, now I am poppy drunk

James Marshall Goff April 7, 2009 at 7:48 AM very dreamily beautiful! Barbara! Jim

Frank F. Atanacio March 26, 2009 at 1:47 PM beautifully done-- crisp 10/10

Christopher Higgins March 26, 2009 at 1:21 PM I just love when you come by poem because you always encourage me so...This is an awesome poem Barbara filled with lots of images..silky petas reaching is gorgeous...we need to read each other more often..Hope you are well and thanks.

Carolyn Devonshire March 26, 2009 at 10:00 AM It sounds like a beautiful place, Barbara, and your poem gives life to the poppies. Great image! Love, Carolyn

Denis Joe March 26, 2009 at 2:27 AM This is a beautiful use of the nature metaphor, The language is simple and, as such, unpretentious. I love the way that the five lines lead so well into the sixth, creating a fantastic piece of imagery.

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire March 25, 2009 at 6:16 PM Dear Barbeeg Barbara, such a Beautiful POEM Nature at its best ALWAYS YOURS...HG I saw YOU on line and had to WRITE a Comment as tonight is Comment Writing night Talk to YOU later My Beloved...HG

Kristin Reynolds March 25, 2009 at 5:22 AM Gorgrous, image, gorgeous! love, Kristin

Arany P. March 25, 2009 at 3:51 AM wonderful writing... all the lines just makes it all more beautiful! ~ Arany

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire March 24, 2009 at 8:08 PM Dear Barbara My Barbeeg, YOUR Heart is so beautiful I wish I could see the earth through YOUR Eyes YOU have my Heart in YOUR HANDS Teach it How to LOVE ALWAYS Xliamp LOVE YOU ALWAYS...HG

Carrie Richards March 24, 2009 at 7:12 PM Lovely poem....lovely California orange! We have them around us too! Cheery sight!! :)

Tyesha Ehigiator March 24, 2009 at 6:57 PM Lovely presentation here, with great flowing images.. The title is fitting...Good Job, GB Tyesha

Raul Moreno March 24, 2009 at 6:38 PM Beautiful muse you chose to write about. NIce job...Raul