Get Your Premium Membership

The Cactus

the moth has got stuck in the thorns of the cactus the white buds demur March 17, 2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 3/22/2018 11:07:00 PM
A haiku return............................................................... a thorny cactus... from hot dry lands it does hail... my thinking cap... lost......................................................... Mick
Login to Reply
Date: 3/17/2018 11:41:00 PM
Whoaa! That's nice Sir.
Login to Reply
Singh  Avatar
Sakshi Singh
Date: 3/17/2018 11:54:00 PM
Madam? Better will be miss or u r my senior u can call my name also, sir
Gupta Avatar
Probir Gupta
Date: 3/17/2018 11:51:00 PM
Thank you so much, Madam ! ...
Date: 3/17/2018 10:30:00 AM
I really like this one, Probir. Great image.
Login to Reply
Gupta Avatar
Probir Gupta
Date: 3/17/2018 11:30:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea ...
Date: 3/17/2018 6:33:00 AM
Imagery well captured, Probir.
Login to Reply
Gupta Avatar
Probir Gupta
Date: 3/17/2018 11:31:00 PM
Thank you, Vijay ...
Date: 3/17/2018 12:51:00 AM
Ouch, but I guess its survival of the fittest Probit, a lovely haiku:-) hugs Jan x
Login to Reply
Gupta Avatar
Probir Gupta
Date: 3/17/2018 11:32:00 PM
Rightly said, Jan ... Thank you ...