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The Cactus

the moth has got stuck in the thorns of the cactus the white buds demur March 17, 2018

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Mick Talbot

Date: 3/22/2018 11:07:00 PM

A haiku return............................................................... a thorny cactus... from hot dry lands it does hail... my thinking cap... lost......................................................... Mick

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/18/2018 8:07:00 AM

- This was great, Probir - Very well done - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sakshi Singh

Date: 3/17/2018 11:41:00 PM

Whoaa! That's nice Sir.

Sakshi Singh
Date: 3/17/2018 11:54:00 PM

Madam? Better will be miss or u r my senior u can call my name also, sir

Probir Gupta
Date: 3/17/2018 11:51:00 PM

Thank you so much, Madam ! ...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/17/2018 10:30:00 AM

I really like this one, Probir. Great image.

Probir Gupta
Date: 3/17/2018 11:30:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea ...

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/17/2018 6:33:00 AM

Imagery well captured, Probir.

Probir Gupta
Date: 3/17/2018 11:31:00 PM

Thank you, Vijay ...

Jan Allison

Date: 3/17/2018 12:51:00 AM

Ouch, but I guess its survival of the fittest Probit, a lovely haiku:-) hugs Jan x

Probir Gupta
Date: 3/17/2018 11:32:00 PM

Rightly said, Jan ... Thank you ...