Notes About The Poem

~this poem is me not seeing the big picture, not realizing I am meant to become a butterfly~

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The Butterfly Who Would Never Be

I am a most important caterpillar
She said to me
Going about my life
My very busy life

I have a world of crucial things to do
I have a home a family and friends
I have a very prominent job
I am indispensable

I have goals and aspirations
Most grandiose of plans
I have so much to do
I am a most important caterpillar
And want to live forever



Read on air by invitation  ~  May 22, 2022  'POETS HARBOUR'

AP: Honorable Mention 2026, Honorable Mention 2020, Honorable Mention 2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Hauser  Avatar
November 4, 2018 at 2:04 PM
Wouldn't we all! Lovely write!
Gauthier Avatar
November 4, 2018 at 6:44 PM
LOL. Thanks, Mike.
Kiser Avatar
October 14, 2018 at 12:30 PM
A live-loving caterpillar? Beautiful! What colors will it bring to this world?
Gauthier Avatar
October 14, 2018 at 12:38 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, ML.
Teagan Avatar
October 13, 2018 at 9:16 AM
Cute poem, Line! Busy little caterpillar.
Gauthier Avatar
October 13, 2018 at 10:42 AM
Thanks, Becca.
Rose  Avatar
October 13, 2018 at 5:55 AM
She holds a very important position indeed. It is her duty to make sure those wings bloom come summer heh, ps. there are days when I feel like that caterpillar, there are days when I don't, thank you for sharing, your words fly.
Gauthier Avatar
October 13, 2018 at 6:24 AM
Yes indeed, Pixie, there are days when we all feel like that very indispensable caterpillar who has NO clue what is around the corner for her. Line xx
Mcguire Avatar
October 13, 2018 at 5:19 AM
And What a beautiful butterfly she will be Shines like the sun so fancy free A sparkle in everyone's eyes Visiting all her flower friends as she flies
Gauthier Avatar
October 13, 2018 at 6:24 AM
Absolutely, Timothy. Thanks for your lovely visit and comment. Line xx
Coulstock Avatar
October 12, 2018 at 9:10 PM
Ah so sweet Line.You make her seem almost human! Love it.
Gauthier Avatar
October 13, 2018 at 6:26 AM
Indeed. Thanks you for your much appreciated visit and comment, Sylvia.
Krutsinger Avatar
October 12, 2018 at 9:01 PM
This poem makes me want to look up statistic on how long a caterpillar gets to be a caterpillar. Whimsical and fun, Line!
Gauthier Avatar
October 13, 2018 at 6:26 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Caren.
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