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~this poem is me not seeing the big picture, not realizing I am meant to become a butterfly~

The Butterfly Who Would Never Be

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I am a most important caterpillar
She said to me
Going about my life
My very busy life
I have a world of crucial things to do
I have a home a family and friends
I have a very prominent job
I am indispensable
I have goals and aspirations
Most grandiose of plans
I have so much to do
I am a most important caterpillar
And I need to live forever



Read on air by invitation  ~  May 22, 2022  'POETS HARBOUR'

AP: Honorable Mention 2020, Honorable Mention 2020

Posted on October 12, 2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 11/4/2018 2:04:00 PM
Wouldn't we all! Lovely write!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/4/2018 6:44:00 PM
LOL. Thanks, Mike.
Date: 10/14/2018 12:30:00 PM
A live-loving caterpillar? Beautiful! What colors will it bring to this world?
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/14/2018 12:38:00 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, ML.
Date: 10/13/2018 9:16:00 AM
Cute poem, Line! Busy little caterpillar.
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Date: 10/13/2018 10:42:00 AM
Thanks, Becca.
Date: 10/13/2018 5:55:00 AM
She holds a very important position indeed. It is her duty to make sure those wings bloom come summer heh, ps. there are days when I feel like that caterpillar, there are days when I don't, thank you for sharing, your words fly.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/13/2018 6:24:00 AM
Yes indeed, Pixie, there are days when we all feel like that very indispensable caterpillar who has NO clue what is around the corner for her. Line xx
Date: 10/13/2018 5:19:00 AM
And What a beautiful butterfly she will be Shines like the sun so fancy free A sparkle in everyone's eyes Visiting all her flower friends as she flies
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/13/2018 6:24:00 AM
Absolutely, Timothy. Thanks for your lovely visit and comment. Line xx
Date: 10/12/2018 9:10:00 PM
Ah so sweet Line.You make her seem almost human! Love it.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/13/2018 6:26:00 AM
Indeed. Thanks you for your much appreciated visit and comment, Sylvia.
Date: 10/12/2018 9:01:00 PM
This poem makes me want to look up statistic on how long a caterpillar gets to be a caterpillar. Whimsical and fun, Line!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/13/2018 6:26:00 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Caren.
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