The Butterfly Jinn

One jinn butterfly flew on his wings three wishes lay.
One wish was for true beauty to grace forms caste of clay.

For though all things are beautiful, their mind doeth say neigh
And discord comes when envy vies and jealousy doest play.

And once man’s reached reality as to truth he’s reborn
The butterfly in me would wish true kindness would form.

Kindness, so that none would hurt another and fear be allayed,
kindness for each and every day, so anger and hatred are kept at bay.

The third and final wish my jinn butterfly would carry
Would be forgiveness when in weakness good men do tarry.

Each of us like the butterfly feel trapped ‘tween the glass
Praying to fly free before our glory days have passed.



**In Arabic, a genie (also jinn, jinni, djinni, from Arabic jinni) is a supernatural creature which occupies a parallel world to that of mankind
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Brown Avatar
January 13, 2011 at 11:34 AM
Congratulations Deborah on your win in "Annalise's Contest". Love, Carol
Radke Avatar
January 9, 2011 at 8:45 PM
Oh, very good, Deborah. I love the butterfly analogy. Congratulations on your winning placement with this excellent piece of writing. I hope all is well. Take care. Love, Deb
Onclaud Avatar
January 9, 2011 at 7:18 PM
a jewel of a piece that speaks eloquently of peace... that's the hearwarming genie, deborah! applause on your big win! :) nette
Sweetheart Avatar
January 9, 2011 at 9:51 AM
Congrats Debbie on your wonderful win in Audrey's great contest with this excellent entry ... enjoy another top ten with luv..
La France Avatar
January 9, 2011 at 6:50 AM
Congratulations Deb, on your win in Audrey's contest with this beautiful and well written poetry~~
Mehta Avatar
January 9, 2011 at 6:22 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of Audrey, Deb
Neels Avatar
January 9, 2011 at 3:43 AM
Congratulations on your win with this beauty Deborah ;-) WN
Johnson Avatar
January 8, 2011 at 10:07 PM
Congratulations on your win with this beautiful poetry. An interesting creature, your jinn butterfly.Love, Joyce
Haick Avatar
January 8, 2011 at 7:50 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest, Deb! Congratulations! Love, Audrey
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January 8, 2011 at 7:45 PM
Congratulations on your win in Audrey's contest, Deb. Love, Carolyn
Thaker Avatar
July 30, 2010 at 6:41 AM
Good one!!!!!! Good wishes!!!!!!! Good thought!!!! When everything is good, who can dare you not to win in the contest!!!!! Vrushani!!!!!!!
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July 28, 2010 at 11:00 PM
This sounds like a winner to me, Deb. I don't think you need luck for this contest. You have wisdom on your side. I love the analogy between the butterfly and rebirth. (One of my favorite analogies found in nature.) You have used it so well in this poem. BIG SMILES and love. Dane Ann
Guzzi Avatar
July 28, 2010 at 7:27 PM
Jinn may refer to: Genie, an Anglicization of the Arabic term ?? (jinn or djinn) , a supernatural being in Islam
Dietrich Avatar
July 28, 2010 at 6:04 PM
Very nice, Deb. It seems like something metaphysical, the word jinn. Let me see what else you have today!
La France Avatar
July 28, 2010 at 1:12 PM
Some beautiful thoughts in this poem ~ best of luck in the contest ~
Henderson Avatar
July 28, 2010 at 11:21 AM
Soup mail waiting. Charles
Mehta Avatar
July 27, 2010 at 5:13 PM
Very uplifting wishes you have expressed. Good luck in the contest, Debi
Sweetheart Avatar
July 27, 2010 at 4:09 PM
Way to go TEACH... u have incorporated the very best wishes into one glorious write.. good luck in the contest.. my entry is "Powerful Potions"... with luv..from your pupil...
Kendrick Avatar
July 27, 2010 at 4:05 PM
Interesting thoughts that you have penned using unusual metaphoric language for the topic..Sara
Roberts Avatar
July 27, 2010 at 3:31 PM
lovely couplet, good luck in the contest
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