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~The Butterflies Dance~ (A Double Whitney) The sun is so warm and nice there is cheer everywhere cause spring has sprung one more time and winter so cold is now gone. The robins have returned and the hibiscus and the roses bloom again to my delight Now I see butterflies dance. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2012 January.27.2015

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Graphite Drug

Date: 11/7/2016 3:13:00 PM

"Spring has sprung," could be considered cliché, but overall the poem is simple, cheery, and has some bright imagery.

Balveen Cheema

Date: 10/24/2016 6:58:00 AM

In autumn I feel your spring with robins and butterflies! May happiness spread! Balveen

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 10/24/2016 3:27:00 PM

Thank you ever so kindly Balveen, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Deeply appreciated:))Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light God bless you!:)D

Sabbath De Yecouba

Date: 10/19/2016 8:16:00 AM

I can feel the spring springing. I can see hibiscus and roses bloom. I can also see the robins return. And finally, I feel warmth of the sun and coldness of winter. It's a nail on the head!

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 10/20/2016 11:22:00 AM

Thank you ever so kindly Mamer, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Deeply appreciated:))Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light God bless you!:)D

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/17/2016 10:00:00 AM

I am not familiar with the form but I like the result.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 10/20/2016 11:21:00 AM

Thank you ever so kindly Richard, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Deeply appreciated:))Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light God bless you!:)D

Mpho Kgaswane

Date: 10/1/2016 5:33:00 PM

It is beautiful...Awakening too.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 10/14/2016 1:32:00 PM

Thank you ever so kindly Mpho, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Deeply appreciated:))Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light God bless you!:)D

Payal Saxena

Date: 9/23/2016 11:44:00 AM

Nice cute writing.. lovely beautiful images

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 10/14/2016 1:31:00 PM

Thank you ever so kindly Payal, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Deeply appreciated:))Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light God bless you!:)D

Bl Devnath

Date: 9/23/2016 10:19:00 AM

Beautiful poem on natural beauty of winter my friend. Lovely. A 7. Hugs, Cloudy poet, bl

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 10/14/2016 1:31:00 PM

Thank you ever so kindly BL, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Deeply appreciated:))Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light God bless you!:)D

Bl Devnath

Date: 4/18/2015 12:59:00 PM

Excellent beauty of both pictures and the poem itself. A precious gem like. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 10/14/2016 1:30:00 PM

Thank you ever so kindly BL, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Deeply appreciated:))Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light God bless you!:)D

Len Gasun

Date: 1/28/2015 6:59:00 AM

I am a nature lover and this is such a very precious poem about nature my very dear friend, Dorian. So soothing and refreshing to the feeling as I read every line (fave). Hugging this gem of yours so much. Thanks a lot for sharing! Thanks a lot as well for your precious time stopping by on my poem leaving me your very encouraging comments. More blessings! love lots and big hugs, Leonora

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 1/28/2015 5:33:00 PM

Hi Leonora! Thank you so much my dear friend for your very kind visit and comments. Much appreciated! God bless you! Love and hugs! xxxxx D. ^O^

Kp Nunez

Date: 1/27/2015 8:59:00 PM

What a pleasant read it is, dear Dorian. You always manage to write of things beautiful and inspiring and it speaks of your lovely soul . Such delightful imagery enhanced by your careful choice of pictures...Warm regards. Kim :)

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 1/28/2015 5:36:00 PM

Hello Kim! Thank you so much my dear friend for your very kind visit and comments. You're very sweet! Will visit your page very soon.Much appreciated! God bless you! :)Love and hugs! xxxxx D. ^O^

Emile Pinet

Date: 1/27/2015 2:34:00 PM

As refreshing as a spring rain with its promise of renewal. The story like quality brings a friendly feeling to the reader and we can almost see the butterflies. Emile. #7

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 1/28/2015 5:37:00 PM

Hello Emile! Thank you so much my dear friend for your very kind visit and comments. You're too kind! Will visit you very soon.Much appreciated! God bless you! :)Love and hugs! xxxxx D. ^O^