The Butcher's Mark

I saw you in a dream with wicked eyes;
I saw you perched atop the eaves with a cloven hoof.
You took flight but left a rancid scent dispersed.
Through the night until we woke side by side-
 an ethereal lover lost in cosmic plight.
The degrees by which we judge our sanity
 are becoming more and more slight.
Let's tear up these tracks,
 and lay down a different law.
I'll take my misguided thoughts and bind them with yours.
I'll be the damsel, eyes wide with fright.
I'll hold you closer as you guide me away from the light.
I'll pretend not to notice
 when we enter the death chamber and you turn the bolt.
I will gasp when I feel hands on my ribs-
 A Butcher exploring just where to make his mark.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 2/5/2012 12:41:00 AM
You know you are by far my favorite poet..even when we werent married so you know im not full of it. Love you babydoll. Keep doing what you love. Id say what youre good at but that seems to be pretty much everything. Anyway. I adore you and your words continue to move me. Cant wait to hear you read them aloud. All youve written that ive read i find myself saying one word "WOW" . You have a true gift and its one of the countless reasons i love you so much. Im so proud of you.
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Date: 1/20/2012 5:37:00 PM
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