The Burning Torch

The Burning Torch

My darling I am coming home, for you just wait and see
I didn’t drown that fateful day, into the deepest sea.
I hear you call me every night, you sit upon the porch
And wait for me now to return, I see your burning torch.

It started out like any day, the sea so calm, just right
Blue cloudless day, a gentle breeze blew on the mast so tight.
Good fishing had, now time to go, set sail for homeward bound
No worries had, for our return we would be safe and sound.

Some clouds rolled in to blot the blue, the sea began to foam
We’d gone out miles to catch the best, before we turned for home.
The sailors all went to their place, dark clouds began to form
They knew the signs were ominous a brewing of a storm.

The nets reeled in, a thunder clap, then lightning sent a flare
With expert hands upon the deck, to panic would be rare.
The Captain spoke “Now listen men, this storm puts us to test
It seemed to come from no-where lads, just do your very best".

The clouds grew dark, the waves lashed out, the ship it bobbed about
With lightening flashing all around, loud thunder clapped, no doubt.
Our footing hard to keep on deck, all soaked from rain that poured
I did not see the big wave come, next we were overboard.

We thrashed about the raging sea; we watched the ship go down
Could this be really happening, I knew that I would drown.
My mind though strong, my body weak, ‘twas then I heard you shout
“Come back to me” but was too late, this angry sea won out.

And just as I was going down, again I heard your voice
"Come back my love I need you here, don’t leave you have a choice".
I chose to stay right by your side and be your guiding light
From where I lie on oceans bed I see you every night


So yes my love I heard your call, upon that fateful day
And though you’re saddened by my loss, I have now this to say.
“Do not be sad my dearest one, do wipe away your tears
For I was with you in the past, will stay throughout your years."

Now as you sit upon the porch and gaze out to the sea
Keep searching for my ship’s return, one day you will see me.
You’ll see me smile, I’ll take you hand together we will go
To where life’s journey does return, and only we will know.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 4/27/2025 7:36:00 AM
Love this seafarers' tale Christine. Congratulations! :)
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Christine Watts
Date: 4/28/2025 4:31:00 PM
Hi Linda, Thank you, I enjoyed writing this although a sad one from me and a bonus winning circle is my reward Cheers Christine
Date: 4/27/2025 2:00:00 AM
Hi Sara Thank you very much always a thrill to be in the winners circle Cheers Christine
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Date: 4/26/2025 12:57:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Storms are scary, some very dangerous with some deaths, injuries and destruction of property. It is good to have a stronghold to lean on. Sara K
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Date: 12/12/2021 11:36:00 AM
To get inside the reader and touch their heart as they read your poem, takes real talent, and you have it.
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Christine Watts
Date: 3/25/2022 3:46:00 PM
Hi Wendy thank you for such a lovely comment Much appreciated This is one of my favourites and I enjoyed writing it so glad you enjoyed reading it Cheers Chris
Date: 12/9/2021 6:37:00 PM
Hello Christine ... a fine tale indeed about the ocean's fury and the fisherman's fate. On every trip a wife must worry - thank you Christine - Lindsay
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Christine Watts
Date: 12/9/2021 10:09:00 PM
Hi Lindsay Thank you very much for your review Yes wives would worry at times. I am pleased for your comments Cheers Chris
Date: 12/7/2021 11:23:00 PM
Hey Chris…..I have written you a message on Soup Mail. Debx
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Date: 12/7/2021 9:00:00 PM
Christine this poem is so beautifully written and so captivating and sad….I didn’t want it to end. You are a great storyteller. Loved !Debx
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Christine Watts
Date: 12/7/2021 9:20:00 PM
Hi Deb Thank you so very much I loved writing this it is one of my favourites . I am so pleased you enjoyed this also and appreciate your lovely review Cheers Chris
Date: 12/7/2021 7:45:00 AM
This narrative poem has it all--a well-detailed plot, vivid descriptions, and a moving theme! Janice
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Date: 12/7/2021 11:49:00 AM
Thank you Janice for your review really appreciate this Cheers Chris
Date: 12/6/2021 9:15:00 PM
Sweet!
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Date: 12/7/2021 2:25:00 AM
Thank You Jen, really appreciate your review Cheers Christine
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