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The Burial of His Father

The cold damp day seemed so awry as rain was falling from the sky; the thoughts within his mind distraught with memories of times gone by. His hopeful dreams were filled with fraught as reasons deep within he sought to understand the meaning of the lessons that his dad had taught. But now no lessons preached thereof the meanings of this life and love for somewhere deep within the mist his father watched him from above. Alone with no one to assist begin the struggles to exist he now must face within his spheres, and all his inner strength enlist. He’s hidden all his deepest fears as raindrops mixed with salty tears cascading down his pallid cheek while mourning all those long-lost years. May 18, 2022

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Date: 6/13/2022 8:19:00 PM
"as raindrops mixed with salty tears" - Beautiful. Whole poem is great. Congratulations!
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John Gondolf
Date: 6/18/2022 4:29:00 AM
Thanks so much, Christian, I’m glad you enjoyed it. John
Date: 6/13/2022 5:07:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in my contest John, you did a wonderful job in this poem. Best regards
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John Gondolf
Date: 6/15/2022 2:55:00 AM
Thanks so much, I appreciate it, and thanks for hosting the contest.
Date: 6/1/2022 2:10:00 AM
I suppose so many of us have buried, or had cremated, a father. (I did a poem - "Our Father" - a couple or so weeks ago here.) A lovely Rubaiyat, John.
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John Gondolf
Date: 6/1/2022 2:32:00 AM
Thanks for sharing your thoughts and comments, Andrew, I appreciate it. John
Date: 5/29/2022 6:18:00 AM
A powerful glimpse into fatherhood I could relate to as well I knew my father only through photos. Brilliant John! Blessings xxoo
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/29/2022 1:20:00 PM
Thank you for sharing your thoughts, Connie, I appreciate it. Hugs, John
Date: 5/26/2022 9:59:00 AM
I thought of my father when I read your poem. I definitely could relate to this poem. He came into my life late and just as we were building our relationship he passed away. I mourned for quite a while...then I realized I'd see him again! Enjoyed reading. Take care dear John and God bless you.
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/26/2022 2:18:00 PM
Thank you for sharing your thoughts and comments, Valerie. I hope that the memories I gave you were pleasant ones. Take care and God bless.
Date: 5/25/2022 6:15:00 PM
Extremely well-written verses, John.
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/26/2022 2:26:00 AM
Thank you so much, Jenna, I appreciate it.
Date: 5/18/2022 7:15:00 PM
"Alone with no one to assist." My eyes are misty. In a time such as this, we need comfort, a shoulder to lean on. This is tender and emotional, all at the same time. Your thoughts caress softly around me and my heart. May you always have someone to hold you, whenever you need it, my dear friend. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/19/2022 2:18:00 AM
This is so true Brandy, I am lucky, I know that I have friends who will always be there for me. Thank you for sharing your thoughts. Hugs, John
Date: 5/18/2022 2:35:00 PM
I love the way your sentimental words flow so beautifully John , thanks for sharing.
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/19/2022 2:12:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your thoughts and comments, Vie, I appreciate it. John

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