The Burial of His Father

The cold damp day seemed so awry
as rain was falling from the sky;
the thoughts within his mind distraught
with memories of times gone by.

His hopeful dreams were filled with fraught
as reasons deep within he sought
to understand the meaning of
the lessons that his dad had taught.

But now no lessons preached thereof 
the meanings of this life and love
for somewhere deep within the mist
his father watched him from above.

Alone with no one to assist
begin the struggles to exist
he now must face within his spheres,
and all his inner strength enlist.

He’s hidden all his deepest fears
as raindrops mixed with salty tears
cascading down his pallid cheek
while mourning all those long-lost years.


May 18, 2022
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Alex Avatar
June 13, 2022 at 8:19 PM
"as raindrops mixed with salty tears" - Beautiful. Whole poem is great. Congratulations!
Gondolf Avatar
June 18, 2022 at 4:29 AM
Thanks so much, Christian, I’m glad you enjoyed it. John
Poet Avatar
June 13, 2022 at 5:07 PM
Congratulations on your win in my contest John, you did a wonderful job in this poem. Best regards
Gondolf Avatar
June 15, 2022 at 2:55 AM
Thanks so much, I appreciate it, and thanks for hosting the contest.
John Avatar
June 1, 2022 at 2:10 AM
I suppose so many of us have buried, or had cremated, a father. (I did a poem - "Our Father" - a couple or so weeks ago here.) A lovely Rubaiyat, John.
Gondolf Avatar
June 1, 2022 at 2:32 AM
Thanks for sharing your thoughts and comments, Andrew, I appreciate it. John
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 29, 2022 at 6:18 AM
A powerful glimpse into fatherhood I could relate to as well I knew my father only through photos. Brilliant John! Blessings xxoo
Gondolf Avatar
May 29, 2022 at 1:20 PM
Thank you for sharing your thoughts, Connie, I appreciate it. Hugs, John
Staton Avatar
May 26, 2022 at 9:59 AM
I thought of my father when I read your poem. I definitely could relate to this poem. He came into my life late and just as we were building our relationship he passed away. I mourned for quite a while...then I realized I'd see him again! Enjoyed reading. Take care dear John and God bless you.
Gondolf Avatar
May 26, 2022 at 2:18 PM
Thank you for sharing your thoughts and comments, Valerie. I hope that the memories I gave you were pleasant ones. Take care and God bless.
Logan Avatar
May 25, 2022 at 6:15 PM
Extremely well-written verses, John.
Gondolf Avatar
May 26, 2022 at 2:26 AM
Thank you so much, Jenna, I appreciate it.
Nicole Avatar
May 18, 2022 at 7:15 PM
"Alone with no one to assist." My eyes are misty. In a time such as this, we need comfort, a shoulder to lean on. This is tender and emotional, all at the same time. Your thoughts caress softly around me and my heart. May you always have someone to hold you, whenever you need it, my dear friend. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
Gondolf Avatar
May 19, 2022 at 2:18 AM
This is so true Brandy, I am lucky, I know that I have friends who will always be there for me. Thank you for sharing your thoughts. Hugs, John
Rose  Avatar
May 18, 2022 at 2:35 PM
I love the way your sentimental words flow so beautifully John , thanks for sharing.
Gondolf Avatar
May 19, 2022 at 2:12 AM
Thank you for sharing your thoughts and comments, Vie, I appreciate it. John
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